My uncle is ebullient this morning, remarkably so. He is a man transformed; overjoyed outpourings spill from his lips as he beams at me across the breakfast table.
I, however, having ploughed through piles of obscure texts and ancient tenets from the towering oaken shelves of my uncle’s library (previously off-limits to me), am less so. The taste of the delicious food on my plate is spoiled by the knowledge I have swallowed down over the weeks since my discovery.
I am to prepare for my initiation, he declares.
Passing the baton
gladdens the master’s heart; yet
the burden remains.
Image credit: unsplash.com/@romankraft
Written in response to two challenges:
– Di of Pensitivity101‘s Three Things Challenge – DELICIOUS, OVERJOYED, SPOIL
– Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdge‘s Sunday’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt – PLOUGH (PLOW)
I have also set myself the additional challenges of confining my piece to 100 words exactly and writing this, now ongoing story, (loosely) in the haibun form. Just for fun!
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Wow! I love this portion. 👍🥰💖
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Thanks, Aladdin, I’m pleased you enjoyed it!
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Well done Chris 👍🏻
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Thanks, Radhika 🙂
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Good one 👌
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😉
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Wait, I love the idea of this slightly too enthusiasitc uncle making this declaration to our dear protagonist. Such fun!
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Thanks, Liyona! I’m so pleased you enjoyed it 🙂
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Interesting little piece. well done.
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Thanks, Mason!
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Great immersive story condensed into so few lines 🙂
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Thank you for the appreciation, Tom 🙂
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Wow, why the bitter taste. It’s a book wonderland 💛
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Ah, but the content of those books… something very dark must lie within 😉
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Hehe, I hope there isn’t something wrong with me, because that still sounds alot more interesting than my day job😅
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Interesting? Certainly! But it could get scary… 😉
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Hehe, sounds likes an adventure
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Well, we do like an adventure, don’t we? 😉
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Yes we do.🕊️
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The realization of responsibility is always a shock… Nice writing!
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This is true! Thank you 🙂
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An initiation, and the passing of a baton, with a burden of such. Will we get to learn more about what she has discovered?
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Oh yes! Next week.
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Excellent haibun, Chris!
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Thanks so much, Punam!
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My pleasure, Chris.
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And the mystery deepens, Chris. Your protagonist has gone from being filled with apprehension to dread and now it appears, foreboding. The last 4 words… too much to believe the implication is not as ominous as it sounds?, lol
Impressive for working 2 prompts and in haibun! (had to look that up. cool)
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I haven’t written anything dark for ages. This is going to be fun! 🙂
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Two words: ‘Intriguing’
An engaging Six, which, as we all know, is high compliment, given our self-imposed brevity.
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Thank you very much, Clark!
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Very nice! One of those stories that requires several reads to absorb. Passing of the Baton…a perfect title!
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Thank you, Susan! I’m pleased you like the title. I often find that’s the most difficult thing to come up with.
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I’m liking this ongoing story, very atmospheric and suspenseful. I look forward to the next installment.
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Thanks, Liz 🙂 This one’s shaping up now…
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You’re welcome, Chris. I look foward to reading it.
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WOW, this is fabulous, first word to last–I’m a bit envious 🙂
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Thank you so much, Avia. What a lovely comment! 🙂
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You’re truly welcome ❤
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Passing the baton is passing the burden. I wonder what those discoveries were.
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Time will tell, Frank… eventually 😉
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Ha ha! I’ve missed a couple of weeks so went to read the backstories. Looking forward to next week now!
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Excellent! The next part should be up on Wednesday…
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Nothing great ever comes easily or without a bit of burden! Great job!
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Too true! Many thanks, Joyce 🙂
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😬 More suspense!
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But of course! 😉
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I like how the protagonist is coming to terms with all this while at the breakfast table – food and knowledge – seems they might have to ‘acquire a taste’ for what’s to come. And uncle there, you can feel his relief! Nice Six!
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Thank you so much!
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A perfect little leather-bound, dust covered tale!
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It’s expanding to fill those covers… 😉
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captivating 🙂
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Thanks, da-AL 🙂
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Oh, the rich intrigue!!
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Oh yes, Lisa! More tomorrow 😉
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Let the learning begin! 🙂
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What did I let myself in for..? 😉
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