The red-headed writer, aka the Raconteuse, was been on that long, long, wonderful train, but now she was keen to arrive back to New York; she’d been listening to the two guys talking about the executor of the will and how much money they might inherent; she was still grinning as she left the train, it seemed that their late uncle had a lovely long life.
She’d been mulling in her head as she’d begun to execute a plan and a plot, as she was sitting in a taxi as it made its way to downtown New York; she’d tipped the cab and then walked across and along to the small alley.
She was ready to greet all the Proprietors, as she walked down three steps to the door; she opened the SSC&B, hearing the tinkling bell; Mimi and Tom appeared through the double doors and both of them smiled although their hands were full.
‘There’s only us here at the moment,’ said Mimi, ‘the Bartender has gone on leave with her fancy car, and the Gatekeeper with his gorgeous dog have also gone somewhere; but the tall, thin man is around somewhere – and that new woman, Ms Storme, well, she’s a dark one.’
‘Look, on the table next to the bar,’ said Tom, pointing, ‘this is for you: it’s a small parcel, it arrived yesterday.’
The Raconteuse dumped her big bag, and then stared at it, and stared again; she looked to Tom and Mimi, ‘hmm, that doesn’t look good.’
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Di of Pensitivity 101 – Thursday’s Three Things Challenge: EXECUTOR, EXECUTE, READY

Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdge
Sunday’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt: PARCEL
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awesome story Chris! I loved it! ❤
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Aww, thanks, Carol Anne😊
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You are anything but stationary, dear Chris!
( I don’t think we covered bomb damage at the SSC&B insurance 😆)
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It’s not so much about that song, but more about what they’re called -🐪
However…
Bomb? Did you say bomb??
Anything strange would be too dicey for insurance people – they would run a mile from that! (I know)
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I wonder if that camel is in that box. Nice description of Rosetta as “a dark one”.
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The jade camel, could it be there? Gosh, hope not.
I’m still not quite sure about that woman, that Miz Storme…
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Well don’t Chris with all these words so well integrated into your story
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Thanks, Sadje… that wasn’t easy, but I managed!
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You’re most welcome my dear friend
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Chris, no one has to be “railroaded” into reading your compelling ongoing saga. With apologies to the Muppets, “The Raconteuse Takes Manhattan”!
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Oh, love it… can I bring the Muppets too?
Thanks so much, Dave!
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Why not? 🙂
(You’re very welcome, Chris!)
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Oooh…… will she take the money or open the box? Who knows the secret of the Black Magic Box? Looking forward to seeing where this leads Chris………..
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I’m thinking about some lovely chocolates – maybe Cadbury Bournville or Lindt?😂
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Oh, Lindt chocolate caramels are the best!
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the best of the (underlying concept) of the Six Sentence Cafe & Bistro in your dovetailing (intersecting narrative? or as Nick might say, weaving a branch of a tale the better that we might all find new adventures and character development)…
aka: v cool
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All those things and all of us… you know?
plus, I feel I need (that’s meaning the Raconteuse) to know more about that woman (maybe)
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yeah, you and everyone else!*
*I include myself in the coterie of the curious
we do know some things: she is between 19 and 23 years old, smokes, has good (and expensive) tastes in clothes is not uneducated and, we are all pretty convinced that she is not shy, introverted or readily inclined to be submissive to anyone (with the possible exception of two, maybe three people)
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I’ll remember that (I meant the red-headed woman, you know)
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Firstly, that music choice is lovely. And what has the Raconteuse in her hand? A jade camel, perhaps?
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Oh yes, great UK band, back in the day!
but the red-headed woman, has what? really not sure, at the moment…🤔
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…time will tell!
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A bit of a cliffhanger . . .
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Oh yes, still working out what will happen…. (thinking)😂
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☺️
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The package arrived the day before. Hm… who could have known The Raconteuse would be heading to the Six Sentence Café & Bistro? Coincidence?!?
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Ha ha, there’s never a coincidence there… it’s bound to be a plot, or maybe a plan.
(I think)
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Not coincidence, where else would she eventually land, and whoever sent it could be sure she would. Those who love this place always make their way back sooner or later, and parcels can sit and quietly wait.
As for Ms. Storme, my heart aches for such as her. Beautiful little people twisted by grown-ups they should have been able to trust and they in turn grow to be so damaged.
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You are right, it’s always nice to go back again into the SSC&B and there is always something to do there as well.
But poor young woman, maybe we can all help a bit…
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Well… I helped as much I could😉
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Ah, Ms Stormer, a dark lady; interesting! And if that Jade Camel is inside the Pandora box??🙄😉🥰
Beautiful music!🤗👍💖
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Oh yes, great song (big smile) but then I need to refocus about that box?!
(oh, and oh, again)
🤔😊😂
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Uh-oh, is it going to be the jade cam in the parcel? If it’s chocolates, as mentioned above, don’t eat them! You know what happens when they eat chocolates that come in the mail in Agatha Christie stories! 😬
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Still just guessing but we must be careful, and yes, even chocolate.🍫 Pity we don’t have Tommy and Tuppenny here.😉
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wonderful Chris. I must dig out my one Camel LP.
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Definitely, Gary!🎶
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Oh… who sent the 🐪?
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Don’t know… yet🤔
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Mystery is good!
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Dunh dunh DUUUUUUUUUUUUUNH! This episodic structure is so awesome when you use it! xxxxxx
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Aww, thanks so much, Jean – I just need to think what goes next (giggling) 😂 xxxxxxxxx
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