
I remember that day
my Ouma and me
perched on the bench
in the shade of her stoep
making up adventures
like we always did.
I remember that day
bright brown eyes
crinkling at the edges
her words, like whispers
captured by the keys
as I typed, my new laptop
balanced on my knees.
I remember that day
my Ouma and me
mind filled with light
eyes button-bright
sharing her final story
with me.
My Ouma has gone
but her stories live on
and now I am
the story teller.
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Image credit: Sasint @ Pixabay
Written in response to Sadje‘s What Do You See #110 photo prompt
Absolutely beautiful. A story of a story teller! Thank you 😊
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Thank you, Asitha. 🙂
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You are welcome, Chris 😊
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Extremely poignant and touching! Especially so in the last line. Beautiful poem! 👌
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Thanks so much, Sam 🙂
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Thanks for sharing!
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Such a beautiful poem/story Chris. The magic of your narration made me feel as if I was sitting along with them. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks so much, Sadje! We could just sit and listen to them telling stories while stroking the cat… 😊
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Yes, so true. You’re welcome my friend
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Thanks for sharing, as always, Sadje! 🌹
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oh chris, that is beautiful! What wonderful memories! Xoxo
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Thanks very much, Carol anne! 😊
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Thanks for sharing!
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Welcome…
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That’s so beautiful Chris. You’ve captured the moment superbly 🙂
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A beautiful story, Chris. I think one of the best legacies is being able to pass on the story telling ability 🙂
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Thanks very much, Maria. Our stories will live on…
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Thanks very much, Deb. I was really drawn to this photo.
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Wonderful poignant tribute to the people who keep inspiring us! ❤
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Thanks, Tom!
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Beautiful story and storyteller.
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Thanks very much, Cassa!
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I love this poem, so heartwarming! It’s a wonderful way to start my day.
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Thanks, Liz! I’m pleased it got you off to a good start 🙂
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You’re welcome, Chris!
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Our grandparents have a treasure trove of stories in their repertoire. Unless we save them, they will all be lost with time. Such a lovely take on the prompt Chris!
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🙏 It’s so important to capture those stories, Radhika! I missed so much but not asking that older generation more questions when I had the opportunity.
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A sad bit beautiful tale…and yes, the story goes on.
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Thanks, Chris 🙂 One way we live on is through our words.
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Never was a truer word spoken.
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Stunning story! Fantastic! Thank you.
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Such a meaningful poem from that lovely photo. There’s a series of pictures around these two, and more about youngsters and oldsters coming together over tech. I love it.
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I sense that the two of them might have other stories to share!
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What a beautifully sentimental poem, I love it. What language does ‘Ouma’ come from?’ it’s grandmother right?
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Thanks, Mason! Ouma is the Afrikaans for grandmother, although the word is also used as a respectful word with which to address an old woman.
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It sounds respectful doesn’t it. A nice word. Thank you educating me. I appreciate it.
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It is a nice word, as is its male equivalent, Oupa.
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That’s quite nice too.
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I love this! I can truly relate! I saw it when you first posted it but here it was midnight and I was too sleepy to respond. 😂😂
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I know, time zones are a problem! I remember almost falling asleep in my soup the second evening we were in Chile… 😴💤
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I always think it’s fun though, when I’m reading someone’s blog from across the world, and I realize we’re in “real time” commenting back and forth. Usually it’s if I’m up late, and it’s daytime where they live, although I guess it could with both ways!🤔
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You’re definitely the night owl, Debra!
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Yep!🦉
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I really like this one, Chris. I bought a cross stitch design today seeing as we probably won’t be going out much over the holidays again. My grandmother taught me embroidery.
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It’s nice to have acquired a skill like that. My grandma taught me some of her best cheap and hearty recipes before I left home, including her Lancashire Hotpot, which was published in the Sunday Times readers’ recipe feature about a decade ago!
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Do you still have that recipe? I’ve been looking for a Lancashire hotpot recipe.
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I’ll send it to you, Robbie!
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Thank you, Chris.
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That is so beautiful
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Thanks very much, Gary. 😊
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Oh, Chris, this is so lovely. Reminds me of my Grandma.❤️
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I’m so pleased to hear that, Jeff.😊
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That’s beautiful!
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Thank you, Shreya.
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Welcome😊
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A moment in time beautifully captured 🙂
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Thanks very much, Carol!
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What a beautiful take on the prompt, Chris!
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A very heartwarming piece Chris..🤗
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Thanks, Mich! 😊
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Wow… beautiful story ❤
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Thanks very much!
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Very nice 👍🙂
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Thank you!
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Expecting more stories
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I think so too 🙂
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Love this!!
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Thanks, Sue! 😊
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This is so sweet, Chris.
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Thanks, Susan!
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Thanks for sharing my poem!
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Wonderful, your Ouma did well, you are a great story teller 🤍
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Thank you for such a kind comment! 🙂
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You are always welcome ❤️
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Wonderful depiction. 💜
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Thanks, Jude 😊
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💜🙏🏾
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I wish I had more stories from my grandparents. I think they were from a generation that, when they immigrated (they or their parents) came to the ‘New Country’ they wanted to leave the past behind.
Even with my limited knowleged of them (their past) I try to keep them alive through the few photos I have – and point them out to my own grand children when they visit. 🙂
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I can understand that they might want to make a completely fresh start. At least you do what you can to keep the stories alive. 🙂
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Nice story, Chris
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Thanks, Jane!
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My pleasure Sadje!
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Thank you Chris*
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Oh, you made me think of my dad and I, sitting in the car as he told stories on our travels to visit the elderly. Now he has passed on, and it is I who tell the stories to my children…
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A sweet memory… that’s how week keep the stories and the storytellers alive.
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