Sun’s last liquid rays slip silently beneath a purple-clouded horizon, while birdsong fills the twilight air. Wings, skimming softly over a wide velvet lake, whisper gentle goodnights, and from night’s star-bright firmament, a pearlescent figure appears, bathed in lunar light.
angel’s wings descend
cocooning the sleeping town
in tender embrace.
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Image credit: Kellepics @ Pixabay
Written in response to Sadje‘s What Do You See #112 photo prompt
Note: It seems that some of my spam woes have returned. So if I seem strangely silent, my comments may well have slid into your spam folder. Please, if I’ve just popped in a ‘like’ on one of your posts and run away, would you mind having a hunt for me and fishing me out!
Just beautiful, Chris. I love both the prose and your poem. Brilliant. Thanks for joining in.
I’m getting all your comments and I keep on checking the spam folder too.
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Thanks, Sadje – another super-inspiring image. The spam thing is strange; it is still happening but only on some of the blogs I’ve visited.
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You’re welcome! It is strange. I think that the filter they use to take the spam out is broken.
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Something’s going on, but isn’t that often the way with WP? We battle on… 🙂
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Yup, despite everything, we are still here writing day in and day out.
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Quite beautiful, a protective angel 😁
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Thanks, Deb!
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A very creative take! I so love the idea of being tenderly embraced by angels at night. Wonderfully thought out!
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Thanks very much, Sam 🙂
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Its so comforting to be embraced by those angelic wings Chris. Absolutely beautiful composition !
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Thanks so much, Radhika. I appreciate your feedback 🙂
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Embracing a sleeping town …. is something only a very benevolent spirit would do.
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I think so!
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A loving embrace is a comfort…
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Indeed! From whatever the source 🙂
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Such a gorgeous piece! Beautifully written 🙂
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Thanks so much, Tom! 🙂
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I particularly like the last three lines. I just checked my spam folder. Five comments from regular followers but none from you. Askimet must be messing with/adjusting their algorithms.
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Thanks on both counts, Liz. I’ll give them ‘adjusting their algorithms’! 😵
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You’re welcome, Chris!
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gray skies
end of year
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And so another comes around!
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Don’t know if you know this, but Tender is the Night is also the title of a novel by F. Scott Fitzgerald. What a coincidence!
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I did know that, Andrew. I read the novel years ago while staying in the south of France. As you probably know, FSF took the title from “Ode to a Nightingale” by John Keats. I thought I’d borrow it too!
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That’s beautiful, Chris. Well done.
I found your comment in the usual place today, no idea why they suddenly got spammed, silly thing,
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Thanks, Mason! I’m pleased your spam isn’t whipping my comments away 🙂
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Me too, that spam can be so rude!
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I just found a comment of yours in my spam folder. I need to keep checking.
Your take is so sweet.
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Ah, I thought that had happened! Thanks for retrieving it. I’m pleased you enjoyed the piece. 🙂
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I got your comments in its regular spot Chris. 😊
And this poem is so beautiful it took my breath away
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Thanks so much, Mich 🙂 At least the WP algorithms haven’t excluded me from your site!
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Soothing story and wonderful Haiku, Chris! I liked the thought of angel embracing the sleeping town.
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Thanks so much, Anisha 🙂
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Lovely haiku, Chris. ❤ Beautiful and comforting.
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Thanks, Cheryl, I’m so pleased you like it 🙂
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PS I just visited the lovely Pippa the hippo. I think my comment may have been swallowed up into your spam.
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That’s magical, Chris. Wonderful take. Love it. ☺️
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Thanks very much, Jeff! So glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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You’re welcome, Chris. Always! ☺️
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Fabulous Chris.. love it. x
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Thanks very much, Sally. 💖
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A beautiful haibun, Chris! ❤️
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Thank you, Eugenia! 😊
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My pleasure, Chris! 😊
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Simply delightful, it gave me a warm feeling on this chilly afternoon.
Btw, I had to fish you out too!
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Thanks, Keith… on both counts! 😊🎣
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love the poem, so deep and insightful
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Thanks very much! I appreciate your comment.
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Love it!!
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Thanks, Debra 😊😇
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Gorgeous 💖
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Thanks, Jude! 😊
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🙏🏾
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A pleasure.
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Such a powerful yet delicate wordage!
And since you may have noticed that I have a thing with Angel’s ( who doesn’t lol) , thank you for the excellent inspiration.
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Only a pleasure… and thanking you too, Spira!
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A beautiful warming Haiku. And the backdrop of the angel so beautifully described.
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Thank you, Kritika!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Evokes for me a number of feelings as i look at the sun going down and imagine this beautiful painted scene you have penned.
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Thanks, Paul. I’m pleased that the words worked for you.
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Beautifully crafted!!!
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Thanks so much, Benjamin😊
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Welcome! 🙂
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