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A celebration?

Chris Hall60 Comments

Previously

The red-headed writer, aka the Raconteuse, hurries along the narrow street, looking up and down and around, checking to see what is unchanged: here’s the Bagel’n’Cake place (closed at this time, of course), and here are the two warehouses, rather dingy, on either side.

She’s almost there… and here it is: The Café and Bistro, she holds her hands up, but there’s no one there; she’s deflated, she dropped her head and her feet felt like lead.

She notices something at the top of the steps, it was a still-smouldering cigar butt on the ground – it must be him, the Gatekeeper, who else could it be?

She hurries down to the three steps by the double-doors, peering in the gloom in the long bar and high seats, and across the way to the food pass behind the doors; she could almost see what should be happening – the Bartender with the wine and whisky, and Mimi in the kitchen, and Tom as well.

Then she turns around, going back up, scanning around; there’s something about the back of The Café and Bistro, she races around the building, heaving her big bag, she peeps in the basement, now she’s making headway; she can hear music, in her mind’s eye, she listens, isn’t it Mark Knopfler playing ‘Sultans of Swing’ and wearing his headband?

The Raconteuse grins and she can see the Manager, smiling back and waving; he cranks up the volume and plays, ‘Ace of Spades’.

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Written in response to two challenges:

Di of Pensitivity 101’s Wednesday’s Three Things Challenge: HEADWAY, HEADBAND, LEAD
Denise Farley of Girlie On The Edge’s Sunday’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt: ACE

Click on the Café sign for more #SixSentenceStories

60 thoughts on “A celebration?”

  4. Hey! the loading docks are hardly the place for the guest of honor. (That said, ya gotta admit, still muy cool a place to hold a pre-party). So the official position is we planned this precisely.*

    *ok a little less planned than on-the-fly, but by way of my own cred, please note the music choice of my first Six this week. Simpatico, senora, simpatico.

    fortunately, the Six Sentence Cafe and Bistro caters to a global clientele so its safe to assume that the social-trajectory of a welcome home party is anything but normal.

    lol
    “Tempus a nemine regitur” yo

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  8. So cool that you combined more than one challenge in the same story. Here’s some “truth in blogging” (lol) I finally looked up the word “raconteuse” because all this time I’ve had no idea what it meant! 😂😂

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  10. Business more or less the usual at the SSC&B while the Raconteuse went on her “Sabbatical to Travel the World” tour. Maybe, there was a drop or two of drama here and there, lol
    I don’t Chris. If the ttm is smiling and waving and cranking the music, something special must be happening!

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