The Bartender was setting up behind the bar and Mimi was counting up the till, just as the red-head writer, aka the Raconteuse, walked into the Six-Sentence-Café-&-Bistro, greeting them both, ‘is he in?’ she asked, as her eyes swiveled over the long corridor where the kitchen was and then the office where the usual Proprietor was often in there.
She could hear that Tom was singing loudly in the kitchen, were he was making bread as the tiny bubbles began to rise and foam; then one of the double doors opened as Tom said, ‘it will be ready in a couple of hours,’ and he stopped – ‘you’re here, how lovely,’ as he waved across to the Raconteuse, ‘I don’t see you enough,’ he said, ‘but come this way, I can see that you need to have a word in the office down there; Tom then winked, as she pushed the other side of the door.
The tall, thin man stood in the Manager’s office, and leaned out, ‘come in, my dear,’ as he gestured to the two cozy chairs, ‘tell me.’
‘Last week I saw someone who looked like me; I was sitting in my usual alcove, and I saw her skirting around the room, and then she quickly ran out again – she was pretending to be me!’
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Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdge
Sunday’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt: FOAM
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I love the surprise ending Chris. I’m sure the story will get even more interesting
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Glad that you liked that, Sadje. Thanks so much!
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You’re most welcome dear friend
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😊
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❤️
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Chris, your last paragraph — wow!!!
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Fun, eh! Thanks, Dave.
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All I’m gonna say is that every time, every time, the Gatekeeper take a vacation things go… Boom boom!
Brava, Chris.
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Oops, sorry about that! But the Gatekeeper has many talents – particularly sculpture, I believe!
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Hmm, a fictional and a real person? 😮I wonder if we all have a fictional version of ourselves somewhere in our minds?
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Ha ha, very possibly – you know, Foster and Panda with their adventures!😺🐼😊
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Lol now that’s true! 😀🐱🐼
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is there any other kind, i.e. both fictional and real.
one might even say that the true temptation in a certain Garden wasn’t the knowledge of Good and Evil, rather it was being comfortable of the juxtaposition of the two… the divine nature within, given Mankind’s err history, kinda needs to be though of as fictional… except among certain people who are gifted to the point of accepting both
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It reminds me about the Schrödinger’s Cat – can it be alive or dead or both, but it can’t be opened. Hmm…
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You had me at John Lee Hooker!
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Fabulous, eh!
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Absolutely!
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What a brilliant concept! To see the other ‘you’ pretending to be ‘you’. Love it!
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It works doesn’t it? Well, at least if you are writer!😉
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And just what is this “normal” of which some speak?
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Exactly. Normal? What is that!😊
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Very intriguing Chris! You are such an amazing storyteller!
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Aww, you are so kind! Thanks so much, Carol Anne😊
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Having real and fictional personae walking about should be normal with story tellers.
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Absolutely. Not a problem if you are a writer – and that’s all of us!
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Come on! One was the shadow of the other, right? The question is, which one was the shadow…!?😉😜 Well done, Chris.👏👍🌹
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Now, lets’ see… they can change from one to the other… and then back again!👩🦰👩🦰 What do you think, eh?🤔 Thanks, Aladin.😊
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Ah, that final line. The SSC&B in all its best & mystical glory. Perfection!
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Isn’t it! It’s wonderful and sublime (almost always). And fun!😉
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👍😸
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Speaking of shadows…
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Wow and wow again. I wonder if I can get that over here..?
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great ending Chris, that’s a great song as well.
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Glad that you enjoyed that, Gary!
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…and then there were two. I’m intrigued!
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Two red-heads are better than one Chris. You keep things interesting.
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Tee-hee, I hope so! 😉
Thanks so much, Darnell.
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HI Chris, the last sentence says it all. A great piece.
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We know don’t we?😉 – Thanks so much, Robbie!
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[…] previously […]
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Dopplegangers oftened appeared at Carrot Ranch… (on a bit of a quiet time at the moment…there).
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Ooh, an excellent thing! I must check this out.
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While there is a shift and reconstruction going on – you can still go back to previous prompts (going to ‘Blog’ and read the links and posts to the prompts. All verse/stories have a 99 word limit, but some folks do stories in series of 99 words to get more said.
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Hmm, interesting🤔
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Excellent Six, Chris. The tall, thin man has point 😎
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Oh yes, the Tall, Thin Man is definitely right!!
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“‘Well,’ said the tall, thin man, ‘I saw both of you – two red-head women – a real person and a fictional person, but come on, that’s normal here, isn’t it?’” – Intriguing!
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… I don’t know what happened with my comment, and how the quoted part ended up like that… 👀
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Interesting in both of those things…
(I don’t know either)
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