The red-headed writer (aka la Raconteuse) had just sat down in her usual booth, all seemed fine, as she started to open her laptop, as she glanced over to the bar where her usual suspects (meaning the Proprietors) – although of course they were not usual suspects at all.
However, she had realised that there were a couple of people around now who she felt were big time hoodlums – like Lou and Rosetta, still they were pretty cool and clearly well-bred and ‘interesting’, and for that she was fine about it.
Then she saw a written note inside her laptop, and that was weird: who had written that? – she didn’t recognise the writing, and why did it say – ‘this is very misleading, isn’t it’; she stared around for a bit, but the only thing she was sure, was that someone had been sitting here just before.
There was no signature, and just six words, how can that help, she wondered; but never worry about that for the moment: time to write!
She had been doing some poetry earlier; it was a good exercise to take more than one meaning; she’d used ‘witch’ and ‘which’, but what next – ‘rose’ or a pretty ‘rose’; but meanwhile, she was also writing a tiny story, one which only used 100 words.
But now she was thinking about food – some nice bread and a lovely moist and rare steak; and suddenly she giggled out loud, that was a perfect word for this… ‘stake’ (poor vampire).
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Di of Pensitivity 101 – Wednesday’s Three Things Challenge: BRED, BREAD, MISLEAD

Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdge
Sunday’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt: STAKE
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Very clever writing and intriguing too.
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(Absolutely digging the music video as backdrop. I wanna be on scene when the next beat drops!)
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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That vid just popped up – never seen the ‘Hot Sardines’ before. Great fun though, and I remember that guy on the TV, and on many other things. Just fab!
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Thanks so much, Sadje!
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You’re very welcome
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😊💞😉
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🥰🥰🥰
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Intriguing! I think she should turn on the audio record button on her phone so she doesn’t miss any of the action.
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Such a good idea. Listen out!!
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I think your Raconteuse and I are working on the same things this morning! hehehe
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Ooh… excellent!
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excellent story Chris, enjoyed it very much! ❤
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So glad that you enjoyed that, Carol! 😊
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Oooo Chris, mysterious notes and lovely moist steaks, …you have my imagination and my taste buds tingling, …great catching up with the shenanigans, …💙
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More mayhem going on… that’s best for me (and my almost me, who’s called la Raconteuse)! 😉
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Big-time hoodlums are definitely scarier than small-time hoodlums! 😲
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Ha ha, that’s so – she will try to keep away (if she can). 🤔
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Thanks for the inclusion……….who wrote the note indeed!!!!
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That note…. we have no idea about that. Wondering if it will be important… hmm. 🤔
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Time will tell then…………………………………….
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I’d never heard of The Hot Sardines. They remind me of Squirrel Nut Zippers, only not as crazy.
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Ooh, two great things… the Hot Sardines and the Squirrel Nut Zippers – wonderful (and new for me).
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😀
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don’t tell anyone! but it just occurred to me, after reading your Six, that the true fun of the Six Café & Bistro lies in being one of the Proprietors…
big time hoodlums – like Lou and Rosetta, enter the scene, fictional characters but dangerous nonetheless (in the context of the Story) yet la Raconteuse is as cool as, well, the genuinely cool Proprietors are…
what fun
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Hundred per cent (and probably more). Such fun, isn’t it… then what’s going on next time – maybe the full crowd, I’m thinking. 🤔
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Interesting note. I wonder how it got inside your laptop. At first I thought Lou or Rosetta put it there.
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Now that’s a very good point. Hmm – could be one or the other… 🤔
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I would imagine it’s very poor form to write about “stakes” when the vampires are near.
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Well, it was only a joke, but it was in poor taste. Sorry about that, you vampires.
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Fabulous, I love it–but I got a bit nervous, was looking around…somethin’s up!
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Yep, something is going on… but what. I guess we’ll find out next time… (we hope).
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Love it! These 6SS days are too much fun!! Blessings on you, and your keen writing!
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Aww, thanks so much. R. 😊
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You’re most welcome!
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Lovely write, Chris. I always enjoy the sense of intrigue you create.
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Aww, thanks so much, Chris!
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Always a pleasure.
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Nice song by the hot sardines…and the story has a lot at stake. ( I mean steak! 😂 )
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Ha ha, I’m giggling… lots of reasons, eh? (YUM)
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I loved this Chris
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Thanks so much, Gary. 💛
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Nice one, Chris… I was picking up very strong Miss Marple vibes with this one… a mystery is afoot, it seems!
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Ooh yes, we do like a mystery don’t we!!
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much enjoyed the intrigue here!
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Glad that you enjoyed that, da-AL!😊
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Such a big mistery in a short story. Congrats, Chris.
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Thanks a lot… although I have no idea what will happen next time!
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All that writing, you’re like a cat with two (or more) tales!
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Ha ha, that’s my Luna 🐈⬛ luna’s on line 😉
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What’s up with the Café, lately, lol. When was the last time there was this kind of intrigue and drama? And who left that note for la Raconteuse?? How did they know she would get to the bottom of whatever it was it said?!
Fun scene, Chris. (really, who left that note?! 😆)
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It’s looking like it’s going to be rather busy in the Café soon… but we will see what happens!
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