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What was in this note? (Tales from the SSC&B)

Chris Hall42 Comments

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The red-headed writer (aka la Raconteuse) had been hurrying to the Six-Sentence-Café-and-Bistro, since she was almost desperate to understand that stupid little note; she was about to cross the busy street, while thinking about thoughts, fortunately she looked both ways by the yield sign, before she stepped across the street.

She was almost by the Café now, as a lightning thought struck her, she stopped for a several seconds, but a moment later she realised what she was thinking was on the wrong track – she sighed; it would be so much better when she was there with Denise and Mimi, especially since it was in the mid-afternoon, one of the best times to talk.

‘Okay, down to business then,’ said Mimi, ‘let’s have another look at that note,’ – while the red-headed writer showed it to both of them, while she read it out loud: ‘this is very misleading, isn’t it’ – oh, and also, do either of you recognise who had written this?’

They all stared at it for several minutes – ‘dense and denser,’ muttered Mimi, – while Denise pulled a face, ‘don’t start that again!’

‘You know what,’ began Mimi, ‘I have not a single flash of inspiration… sorry.’

’But, really it means nothing, nothing at all, maybe you could just forget about it, since I have a better idea,’ said Denise, as her face brightened up considerably, ‘you see I think I know who wrote it, and look who has just arrived,’ as she pointed across the room.

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Di of Pensitivity 101 – Wednesday’s Three Things Challenge: FLASH, BRIGHTEN, LIGHTNING

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42 thoughts on “What was in this note? (Tales from the SSC&B)”

  1. Pause for dramatic effect, Chris…(drum beats add to the tension ) … who could it be? … I’m going to sit here ‘til the next instalment., ….(oh alright, I’ll go, …but, … I’ll keep checking in to see!) …💙

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  12. most excellent development of narrative tension/urgency

    and…and! the idea of going meta in a virtual location with (semi)fictional characters!

    Attention! Attention: mind approaching limits of safe boggling~

    “臨時ニュースを申し上げます” (Rinji nyūsu o mōshiagemasu*)

    lol

    *from the lyrics of Blue Oyster song, ‘Godzilla’

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