a jagged edge, it’s blurring, it’s dark and so cold
tears are dropping across her face, a hand waves
a blunt object appears, it’s unearthing but what?
suddenly something shatters and scatters across the room
she’s moaning, she’s scared, hardly surprising
the hand appears again
what is it doing?
but it’s gone
wake up
BANG
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Image credit: Katie Mukhina @Unsplash
This image shows the shadow of an arm and hand cast on a wall. The outline of the shadow are a bit blurry.
Written in response to Sadje‘s What Do You See #309 photo prompt.

Glad it was just a dream! Or was it?
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It feels real! My own poem just scared myself…. 😂
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What a scary dream. Thanks Chris for joining in with this chilling story.
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Thanks so much, Sadje. That photo looked very worrying!
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You’re most welcome
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colder older
bold as axe is
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Definitely not good!
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as per chris robinson then wiser times.
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Aha… got it! ‘The Black Crowes’, yes?
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correct.
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Since it is waving, one can wave back, but hopefully, the BANG was just from the bedroom door! 🤪😅
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Oh, of course, that’s what happened. Phew!! 😊🥰
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If I have a dream like that tonight, I’m blaming you!
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Gosh, hope not, Keith. Think happy thoughts… please!
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scary!
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Sorry about that!
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no worries -)
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Now that’s a countdown that kept me on the edge of my seat. I hope that Bang was simply her jolting out of her dream.
Do drop by mine.
Cheers,
CRD
http://www.scriptedinsanity.com
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Whew, that was intense!
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Hmm, only a photo… but it just popped into my head. Oops!
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😁
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Your poem leaves me wanting to know more – intriguing!
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I think that’s just a one off. But fun… fun? Maybe not! Thanks though.😊
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Ooooo, I do love a mystery Chris, … open ended, … let the viewer decide, … (I prefer to think she’s opened a bottle of champagne and the corks smashed a few things, … cheers 🍾🥂🍾, ) …and have a great Tuesday, …💙
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Ha ha, I really liked that idea, Penn… hmm, some champagne – bottoms up!! 🍾🥂
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Cheers 🥂 Chris,… have a bubbly Wednesday, …💙
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Nice take.. so many of my dreams are like that, Chris!
🥹
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Oh dear, Cindy, that’s not good. Sounds like scary times, not nice at all. 😥
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Oh Wowwwww
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Indeed!!!
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💖
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Chris, you skilfully convey a sense of dread here, with vivid imagery which has impact, I found it very gripping I hate those kind of dreams!😱
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Thanks so much, Ange! I got a bit scared while writing it too.😂
p.s. – spam is not my friend, since I just put something back to you.
WDYS ‘Very impressive, and wonderfully done, Ange!’
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Don’t worry – I have had a problem with a couple of sites today 😃
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[…] Chris; The Hand […]
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Some nightmares can seem so real! Have you ever tried to wake up, thought you did, but really didn’t! That’s scary too.
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Thank goodness I have never remembered something like that. Eish!!
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