Peacock Butterfly – Crispina Kemp
what happened to me?
I’m a peacock butterfly
look, I’m so pretty
I’m going to have a mate
and a family, but what then?
such a whirlwind month
I’d been a caterpillar
and before an egg
at least, I think so, but now
I’m afraid I’ll be no more
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Jisei – A traditional Japanese Buddhist death poem which discusses death and the meaning of life in the last moments before death. This form uses the syllabic form of the Tanka (5/7/5/7/7) and is generally serious though it can be humorous. We have all mused on our own demise – try to do it in this form.
Plus, I felt I needed two of these.
Thanks, Val
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Thanks so much, Philip!
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Hi Chris and you are welcome! Wishing you a great new week…
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You too, Philip. 😊
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Maybe you’ll see yet another winter through, as the one in the photo has done (that’s why the damaged wing). If not, maybe you’ll be reborn as a human? 🙏💖
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Was it Dorothy Parker who penned: Time It Doth Flit…Oh shit!
😉 lovely poem!
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Oh gosh, wonderful DP – I’m laughing about so many pithy quotes of her! 😊
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What a lovely idea about being a human – and a very good one, we would hope! ✨
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I love the idea of reincarnation (I was raised on it) but why should only humans reincarnate? Don’t animals have souls too? If we grant a soul to humans then we must grant them to animals too
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Oh yes, animals definitely.
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You have experienced a metamorphosis, all in a beautiful form; a wonderful trip! 😉🤗💖
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Let’s have another loop together in that lovely garden… that will be fun! 🦋💞🦋
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Chris, I love the butterfly’s point of view! Wonderful job with the amalgamation of the prompts!!
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I am so glad that you find what I managed to write something about that very interesting Jisei poem. Thanks so much, Val.
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You are very welcome Chris!
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Such short lived excellence!
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Indeed, those lovely butterflies!
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Life cycle of a butterfly in few lines
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Thanks Sadje – I was almost tempted to write much more!
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If a beautiful
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Life in ten lines. Excellent, Chris!
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Indeed, it when so quickly…
Thanks, Dave.
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autumn butterfly
in the hush of unborn wings
this life passes on
a lamp lighting other lamps
and then dusk receives us all
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Oh, that’s so lovely, Misky… very impressed, especially since you mentioned autumn as it is here. I have been watching two swallowtail butterflies just now outside my window.
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How perfectly lovely!
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did emerge with a singe and surge
from puppae
flit to fly
and that is why
butter fly well do tell!
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You have written this so nicely! Excellently done.
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Nice poem, Chris.
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Thanks very much, Andrew.
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You’re welcome.
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A beautiful poem and that is a very colroful and gorgeous butterfly
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These peacock butterflies come from UK, Europe and parts of Asia. Interesting, eh?
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Yes that is good to know. Thank you Chris
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So eloquent and beautifully written, Chris. 🦋💕
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Aww, thanks so much, Eugi. 💛💛
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You’re welcome, Chris.
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Life flutters by! Delightful, Chris.
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Thank you, Keith.
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Loved your poem Chris it is so good! 🕊️💜💜🦋✨#
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Aww, thanks so much, Carol Anne! ✨🦋💛
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Oh my. Such awareness. Someone tell her she’s immortal in the minds of poets. Beautiful Chris.
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Ahh, what a lovely thought, such a sweet pretty butterfly, isn’t she. Thanks Selma.
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She sure is. Thanks for showing her to me.
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The life cycle of a butterfly is full but short
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Indeed! There’s a lot of butterflies in my garden just now, including a pair of swallowtails. Nice.
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Very nice 🩵
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