I will drink coffee
and you will drink lovely tea
but she drinks wine, gosh
that is rather radical
yes indeed, what a woman
“Don’t look at me in that tone of voice.”
let’s slide closer to her
look, she talks fast and loudly
very funny though
she’s so, so dry, isn’t she
and we know her name, don’t we
― Dorothy Parker
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Image credit: Andes Beltran @Unsplash
This image shows someone holding three cups and the cups are made in the image of a woman’s face. The expression on the three cups are slightly different from each other.
Written in response to Sadje‘s What Do You See #337 photo prompt.

Excellent take Chris. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for joining in my dear friend
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That was rather fun, I thought! An excellent photo – thanks for that, Sadje.
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It’s my pleasure when you all respond so kindly to the challenge. 🫶🏼
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Also a pleasure back to you, my dear! 💞
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😍😍😍
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Coffee, tea, or wine — the sense of sadness and the loudness are perceptible! Both the image and the verse are beautifully conveyed. 🌺
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Thank you so much, dear Aladin. 💞
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I liked what you did here Chris 💜💜
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Glad that you liked that, Willow 💛💛
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Talking heads. 😂
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Perfect! 😉
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like the song loner from kansas
your civil tone is not polite
ah audio visions !
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Well quite!
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great use of these heads!
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Fun, eh?
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“Don’t look at me in that tone of voice” — what a line!
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Isn’t it great!
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This is my favorite line in the poem, too!
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Great, eh? Wonderful Dorothy Parker!
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🙂
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The undisputed Queen of Snark!
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Dorothy! Dry with, dry white wine! 🍸🌟
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I had to pop her in this week, dear DP! ✨
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A delightful poem – and an expression I use myself, often!
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I’m pleased about that! (laughing)
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I love that line- don’t look at me in that tone of voice- I will have to remember that!
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Good, eh? Worth remembering that!
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What Violet said!
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Indeed!
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liked it
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But of course.
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Chris this is captivating!
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I should have done this as a Clerihew, shouldn’t I. But I forgot about that. Duh!
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Hehe! There is no rule against rewriting as a clerihew. There was a scavenger hunt way back in 2007 or maybe earlier where we were asked to take a poem and then rewrite it as a haiku, sonnet, limerick, etc. It was a challenge and one that really made me stretch as a poet…
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Chris this is a wonderful Tanka Puente- it can stand alone without the image – so good 🙌
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Aww, thank you so much, Ange! 😊
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💕
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Very well done, Chris 💛
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