now this is a super scarlet ship
and she’s massive and marvellous,
she’s sleek and swift in the seas.
there are many major
operations on
this fine vessel.
so what’s next?
shall we
see?
it
was a
dangerous
mission this time.
the crew were clever
as always, as the waves
were lashing and moaning, but
she was able to aid, for all,
such a splendid, superb scarlet ship.
~~~
Crispina Kemp‘s photo – a fascinating fleet! – https://esvagt.com/services/fleet-list/ –
For Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge No. 80, Alliteration, Robbie has asked that we write a syllabic form using alliteration. Plus a lovely painting down there.

I enjoyed your ode to the scarlet ship!
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Indeed, that’s a super scarlet ship. Nicely written! 👍
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The style of this works really well, Chris, and I love your alliteration.
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