crimson's creative challenge / Flash Fiction

Those two happy boys!

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The two boys had just left that rather nice woman, who had said that she would be happy to see them some time in the future.
“Fun, eh,” grinned one of the boys.
“Oh yes, that huge house was amazing.”
“It’s called The Old Hall.”
“That’s right.”
She had laughed a lot, since she said her name is Ms Hall.
“Still, we need to get moving now,” as the two boys started to pedal more quickly.

Then they continued to bike by the little lane.
“Look just over there. There’s two lovely cows who are munching in the long grass.”
“But that’s not where they stay normally, surely?”

The two of them slowed down to see what was going on.
“Oh look, that farmer is just there, he’s going to herd them back where they are supposed to be.”
“Well, I’m saying, phew.”
“Quite right.”

So off they went smiling.

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150 words

Crimson’s Creative Challenge #104

36 thoughts on “Those two happy boys!”

  5. a nice, pleasant little scene (enjoyable break from the sometimes exciting breakneck speed of other types of posts, i.e. Six Sentence Stories and such*)

    *except for when the excitement is courtesy of a couple of gargoyles, in that case… sit back an enjoy their antics!

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