
She’d taken a dislike to me, made that doll-thing with the pins stuck in it. I stole it from her house while she was out, but she saw me on the way back. She knew.
I tried to make one of her, as a precaution; sure she’d make another one of me. But I couldn’t get the likeness. She didn’t though. Those pains never returned; the ones from the pins. Just that sick feeling whenever something reminded me of it.
Folk in the village cottoned on; others had suffered too. I never said much; smiled, nodded and moved on.
The following spring, I was visited by a crow. He sat on my washing line and looked at me, his head on one side. He came every day. I fed him titbits; told him my troubles.
Other people had crows visit too; the ones who’d fallen out with her.
One spring day more arrived. First a couple; one alighted on the church spire, the other on the maypole – mine, I thought. More came, settling on her roof, on window ledges and door frames, covering the house in a black shroud.
Folk gathered on the village green. Windows cracked, wood splintered. No-one went to her aid. We drifted back to our houses.
Night fell.
In the morning, they’d gone. The little house had been stripped bare. The small, stooped skeleton pecked clean inside.
Some called it a murder of crows. I called it revenge.
©2018 Chris Hall
I love this!
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Thanks Nicole!
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I think it’s a hard form. I just saw a contest coming up but disregarded as I don’t write FF. If I come across it again, I’ll flick you the link.
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Thanks Nicole, I’d appreciate that!
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Oh what an awful way to go, death by crows! This is wonderful, I love that it reads like a standalone story while also being a sequel. There’s so much intrigue!
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Thanks, Ellie!
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wouw. geting very scary…. eaten by the crows..
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