In the world of plenty
a few crumbs falling
from the rich man’s table
is enough to sustain
a little hungry mouse.
Few crumbs fall
in the hidden world of shanty towns,
and now-idle factories;
gold mines and coal mines,
and drought-stricken farms.
You bemoan the closure of
your favourite restaurant
the theatres and the bars;
all the absent opportunities
for late night fun.
While the poor child huddles hungry
in his weeping mother’s lap,
you watch Netflix munching popcorn;
playing pointless games
on your fancy flashy phone.
Written in response to Sadje’s What Do You See #39 photo prompt.
Image credit: S Hermann and F Richter on Pixabay
Being in the world of plenty shuts out the other side, Chris. Just like being in the warmth shuts out the cold…
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It’s a small outpouring of guilt although words don’t cut much ice. But I’ll shake myself and scurry back to fantasy land, like a little mouse back to her hole in the skirting board.
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What an pertinent reminder Chris. We complain about our lives which are full of plentiful and forget those who have so little. Love your take on the photo. Thanks for joining in the challenge my friend
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Always a pleasure, Sadje, even if harsh reality has to crash in sometimes.
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It’s the world we live in! You’re welcome 😉
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oh dear Chris… so timely.. so true…
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Sometimes it just has to be said, I guess.
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And i am so glad you write about this…
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Most of the time I try to avoid the harsh and the gritty but I feel that, as writers, sometimes we should stand up and say something.
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That i have to agree with you 100 percent. We dont need to be rude and disrespectful to send out the message, just like what you did Chris .
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Loved this take! 👍
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Thanks for saying 🙂
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You’re allowed to write about anything that is on your mind and in your heart surely.
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Oh yes, Michael, of course. It was just that I’d previously made up my mind to rise above the ‘Covid negativity’. This is different though and the injustice and inequality will still be here after all this is over; probably worse, in fact.
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beautiful take!!
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Thank you, Era.
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😊
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Definitely agree with this. While we may snuggle in the warmth and watch our favorite show, there might be people outside struggling for a single meal. Well written.
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Thank you, Eliya. Sadly there are many here in South Africa who are struggling. It’s so easy to turn a blind eye.
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Wow Chris, that is powerful! And so true!!
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Sadly so. Thanks for your support, Debra!
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Good one Chris. It makes you evaluate priorities.
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The comment is as much to myself as anyone else. Getting a little perspective back in my life.
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Ooh, that one hits hard. Nicely done, Chris.
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Reminding myself to count my blessings. It’s so much tougher for some.
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I agree, it does all of us good to get that reminder occasionally.
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[…] The Hungry Mouse […]
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Yes. *sharing*
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Thanks, Liz 🙂
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You’re welcome, Chris.
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Thank you for reminding us all. We always need to see the other side of the coin. Well said Chris 🙂💕
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Thank you, Christine 🙂
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Wow! You nailed the prompt and the reality of life today.
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Thanks, Eugenia. It’s a shame it’s the way it is, but we shouldn’t close our eyes.
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You’re welcome!
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Very stark and honest
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Sadly, that’s how it is.
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Spot on, Chris. Always a good idea to ‘zoom out’ when we think we’ve got it bad and contextualise our experiences! So elegantly written.
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Thanks, Matthew. I’ve been trying to put things into perspective.
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So true, Chris. The first stanza(?) (I’m not a poet) had me thinking of the “trickle-down economics” lie the rich like to tell us. The rest of the poem is a reminder to be grateful for what we *do* have.
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Exactly so. The myth is clearly not operating here. So many in such need now. I was trying to jog myself out of the lockdown doldrums.
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Yeah, there’s a lot of people suffering. Many of whom were in dire situations before the virus.
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So sad to see so many, so desperate.
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Thank you for the reality check, Chris.
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I’m trying to keep my minor woes in perspective and it’s mostly working 🙂
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🙂 I hear you!
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We can remember to be kind to our neighbors. But I cannot ‘doom-scroll’ – there will always be inequities. And those who can, will do what they can. Our family has always been involved with volunteer fire-fighting and other areas to help the general public (as well as some older individuals).
Guilt that pushes one to action can be a good thing, but we must take care of ourselves first in order to be able to help others.
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Good for you for volunteering and doing what you can. That’s so admirable. We try to do things in small ways but it’s never enough, especially when you live in the most unequal society in the world. The cracks are widening and so many are falling thorough. I was reminding myself of that.
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It does get difficult when it seems the monkey in the middle who was or seemed to be anyway hold up both ends, isn’t even in the middle anymore. Disproportionate cracks for too many…
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