Photo Prompt © Sandra Crook
That tatty lace was once so pretty. It covered those tall windows, and the light would shine brightly in the early evening.
The sun still smiles, but there’s no-one to see it here in this house.
Then the house was a home.
The walls and the doors were painted in rich and bold colours.
The garden was glorious with many exotic flowers, bushes and vegetables. And beyond, those magnificent trees would often seem to sing.
But that was a long time ago.
Would you see a ghost sometimes?
Would you hear a strange knock in the night?
Maybe? Maybe not.
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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers
Genre: Historical Fiction
Word Count: 100


When the house was a home the house was happy, then. I hope a family with children would rent her, fix her up.
Or perhaps a ghost for a tenant? It’d bring back happiness for sure. This is lovely Chris. Happy I read.
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I’m so glad that you enjoyed that one, Selma. Lots of possible scenarios in that place I felt!
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Love this Chris. Pathos diffused in eerieness
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Thanks so much, Geeta!
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So beautiful
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Love this – you capture a sense of melancholy and decay with a very delicate touch and sensory detail ♥️
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Aww, thanks so much, Ange! I’ll be reading your soon… ✨
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♥️
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I second poetisatinta’s comment, Chris!
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Thanks a lot, Dave!
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Times come and go. Times change. Good capture of before and after Chris.
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Well, we all know about time, don’t we, eh? Thanks, Darnell.
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Yes we do Chris!
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😉
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A lovely take Chris.
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Thank you so much, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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🌹🌹🌹
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🥰🥰🥰
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Very poignant.
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Thanks Sanda.
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your words go nicely with what’s left of that lacy web on the windows, from back in the day
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Such a pretty pattern, isn’t it? 🕸️
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Yes!
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All things fade, except the soul — if we have it! 🤗
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It’s true – and it is… smiling with that thought. ✨
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webs woven
craft art
tomb for flit flyers
tho eh?
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Ah, lovely place…🦇
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So atmospheric, Chris. A real sense of desolation, but with a presence there as well.
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Thank you such much, Matthew – such an interesting photo!
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I really like where the picture took you, Chris.
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Aww, thanks Keith!
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Maybe not. …but maybe so, Chris, …a lovely ponder. …💙
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Well, I do rather like nice ghosts… as you know. Do enjoy that little ponder, Penn. 💛
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I love this. And you will see when mine posts Monday we both say these webs as tatted lace.
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Oh, excellent! I will look forward to reading yours, V.
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If it was not for ghostly knocks, I would sleep in.
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Ah shame… you’re not a ghost friend then, James?
PS – I still am not able to post on your side. Also shame about that.
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Yes Chris, I have been having a few problems. My Theme is no longer updated by WordPress and functionality is degraded. I intend to upgrade, however I am struggling to decide which theme and set up to use. All the best and thank you for reading.
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Nothing lasts forever, and sometimes the thought that ghosts might retain the memories is oddly comforting. A beautiful story.
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I do like what you have said. Thanks for that, Gabi.
PS – this wouldn’t work on your side – spam, perhaps? This is what I said:
What a fab story about those tiny aliens. Love it, Gabi. Also, I’m pretty happy about spiders in general, only the ones which are very dangerous… like little black widows.
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Loved the singing trees
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Glad that you enjoyed that, Neil.
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Sad but good. Well done.
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Thank you very much, Andrew.
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You’re welcome.
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There is something so sad about abandoned houses.
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Well, let’s hope some new people will buy it and make it lovely again!
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Yes!!
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That house has such a fabulous attitude, I feel her new owners are just round the bend. Lovely writing, Chris.
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Ah well, we do hope so… say ‘hi house’!
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Hi House! Be kind and welcoming!
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Whatever has happened or whatever may be, I like the gentle acceptance of the MC.
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Sounds good indeed – such an excellent house!
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❤
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I like how you let us FEEL when the house was a home and Lots of possible scenarios indeed !
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So glad that you enjoyed that, Yvette!
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😊
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