Photo Prompt © Lily
Well it’s not published quite yet, but I’m sure it will. Shall I read some to you, and you can listen? And maybe you might make some comments?
See, I’ve printed all of this out, and it’s in my binder here. I will open it at the start.
I’m quite pleased about the very beginning. It flows rather nicely since the main protagonist, well, she’s pretty feisty and she has some large and heavy keys, and that’s the crux of the whole story, even at the first paragraph.
Oh, you’re going out? Not ready to listen to what I’ve written?
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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers
Genre: Book Excerpt
Word Count: 100
luna's on line 
Lol! An unappreciative audience
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Shame, eh? 🤣
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I feel for both of them
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Well, indeed!
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Oy.
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No worries! Some people are impatient and listen with their ears instead of their senses!😉😁
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Surprising that keys didn’t “unlock” the interest of readers. 🙂
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