Let me out!!

A picture of a tin of spam

Have you noticed I’ve been a bit quiet on the comments front?

Have I just popped in a ‘like’ and run away?

Well, it looks like my witty quips and encouraging asides may have gone astray. It seems they may have been swept up into your spam folder. But I have no idea why.

It hasn’t happened to all of them but it started at 1a.m. PST on Tuesday 12 October. I’ve dropped a note to a few folk and those who’ve seen and checked have found my missing words in their spam folders (thank you all! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™).

I’ve contacted the ‘Happiness Engineers’ too.

For contributors to Sadje’s WDYS, to Di at Pensitivity 101‘s Wednesday 3TC, Denise’s happy band of Sixerians, and anyone who regularly hears from me, if you see a ‘like’ but no comment, it’s a pound to a penny my comment is in your spam… if you have a moment, please track it down and approve it. Maybe then Askimet will stop whisking my words away and hiding them.

I don’t know how long this will last… but please don’t think I’m ignoring you. I’m missing our happy exchanges already. ๐Ÿ˜ข

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photo credit: Liverpool Echo

Naughty but Nice

The image shows shows a tray lined with brown paper filled with doughnuts.

Oh, how I crave your
sweet succulent charms
long to smell the perfume
of your honey-coloured skin

Oh, how yearn for your
sweet yielding softness
ache for the touch
of your full fragrant form

I hunger to taste
your deep spicy sweetness
to nibble, caress and
sate my desire

temptation takes over
my lips are a-tremble
I close my eyes
and swallow you up.


Image credit: Jovan Vasiljeviฤ‡

Written in response to Sadjeโ€˜s What do You See #103 photo prompt.

Not all #Fantasy #Adventures Begin with White Rabbits on this #Podcast: Following the Green Rabbit by @ChrissyH_07

A few weeks ago, I was delighted to discover that my historical fantasy fiction novel ‘Following the Green Rabbit’ was the subject of an episode of author and reader, Jean Lee’s wonderful ‘Story Cuppings’ podcasts. In this series – for picky readers and busy writers – Jean reads and discusses the first chapter of her chosen book, giving listeners a feel for the author’s writing craft and a sense of the story to come. Jean has a superb reading voice and her analysis is warm and insightful. So, I invite you to settle down with a cup of your chosen beverage and listen to what she has to say about my first chapter…

jeanleesworld's avatarJean Lee's World

Welcome back, my fellow creatives! Weโ€™ll continue tasting the wares of fellow indie authors I have gotten to know in this beautiful community through the years.

Iโ€™m thrilled to share a bit of fantastical flavor with you today! Letโ€™s take a sip from Following the Green Rabbit by Chris Hall.

What does a reader experience in those opening pages, and what lessons can a writer take away in studying but a few paragraphs? Letโ€™s find out!

If you do not see the audio player above, you can access the podcast here.

If youโ€™re ever in the mood for unique serial flash fiction and poetry, do check out Chris Hallโ€™s delightful blog!

Be on the look out for more sweet indie goodness in the autumn podcasts to come!

Read on, share on, and write on, my friends!

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Do you believe in faeries? ~ episode 7

Illustration from the Rose Fyleman Fairy Book

Previously

Bethany followed Hans and Greta, who scurried off through the woods, their short legs scuffing up the leaf litter in fountains of foliage. Their house, which Bethany had almost expected to be made of gingerbread, such was the similarity of the pair to the almost-namesakes of her daydreams, soon came into view.

Greta ushered Bethany inside, while Hans pulled the front door closed behind them, leaning back against it with an obvious sigh of relief, โ€˜you donโ€™t think anyone saw us do you, sister?โ€™ he said anxiously, glancing at Bethany, โ€˜if Captain Stinger and his patrolโ€ฆโ€™

โ€˜Hush, brother,โ€™ interrupted Greta; she turned to Bethany, โ€˜please sit down, my dear, while we decide whatโ€™s best to do next,โ€™ she gave Hans a sideways glance, โ€˜rest assured we will not be handing you over to anyone.โ€™

Hans, alerted by the sound of marching feet, rushed outside to greet the approaching patrol, allaying any suspicions with much bowing and scraping, while beyond the patrolโ€™s line of sight, Greta and Bethany peered from the kitchen window: โ€˜I pity anyone who falls into the clutches of the Owl-King,โ€™ whispered Greta, noticing the two prisoners.

Bethany gasped: โ€˜those two prisoners are my sister and our tutor!โ€™

/….on to episode 8


Written in response to two challenges:

โ€“ Di of Pensitivity101‘s Wednesdayโ€™s Three Things Challenge โ€“ LITTER, PITY, DREAMS
โ€“ Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdgeโ€˜s Sundayโ€™s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt โ€“ FOUNTAIN

Bryony, Bethany and Mr Eyre first appeared in my historical fantasy fiction novel, Following the Green Rabbit. They’ve been begging to go on another adventure and it looks like they’ve got their wish!

More stories here!

Bethelbertโ€™s marvellous mystery machine

The image shows shows a rocky landscape, near the ocean. Overhead an old house with a few mechanical devices is floating in the sky on a small piece of land.
The image shows shows a rocky landscape near the ocean. Overhead an old house with a few mechanical devices is floating in the sky on a small piece of land.

All aboard, all aboard!

Cogs whirr, chains clank
pistons pump and gears crank
hang onto your hats and donโ€™t look down
Bethelbertโ€™s ride is the best in town
feast your eyes on the folk down there
open-mouthed they stand and stare
passing over the hills and dales
the oceanโ€™s in sight, do you see those whales?
clouds above and sea below
which wayโ€™s up Iโ€™d love to know
hold on tight and live your dream
in Bethelbertโ€™s marvellous mystery machine!


Image credit: Xresch @ Pixabay

Written in response toย Sadjeโ€˜sย What do You Seeย #102ย photo prompt.

Elizabeth Gauffreau is on the Launch Pad!

Elizabeth Gauffreau and her new poetry book, Grief Songs

It’s my great pleasure to welcome Elizabeth Gauffreau to this month’s Launch Pad spot. Like me, you may already be familiar with Liz through her blog, and others of you will know her through her wonderful novel, Telling Sonny, a book I thoroughly enjoyed when I read it earlier this year.

So, let’s find out a little bit more about her. We’ll start with her official author bio:

Elizabeth Gauffreau writes fiction and poetry with a strong connection to family and place. She holds a BA in English/Writing from Old Dominion University and an MA in English/Fiction Writing from the University of New Hampshire. After a misbegotten stint teaching high school English and Latin, she spent her career in nontraditional higher education.

Her recent literary magazine publications include Woven Tale Press, Dash, Pinyon, Aji, Open: Journal of Arts & Letters, and Evening Street Review. Her fiction and poetry have also been featured in several themed anthologies, including Ad Hoc Monadnock, Shifts: An Anthology of Womenโ€™s Growth through Change, When Last on the Mountain: The View from Writers over Fifty, Familiar, and Poetry Leaves. Her 2018 debut novel, Telling Sonny, was inspired by a family secret and a lot of research into small-time vaudeville.

Learn more about her work at http://lizgauffreau.com.

Liz lives in Nottingham, New Hampshire with her husband. Their daughter has flown the nest to sunny California.

Grief Songs ~ paperback and ebook

Liz’s new book of poetry, Grief Songs – Poems of Love & Remembrance, is just out. It’s a deeply moving collection of poetry which speaks to an album of her family photographs. I just finished reading it yesterday, such a wonderful bitter-sweet collection, it moved me deeply. You can read my review here.

Now, let me hand over to Liz to tell us about the background to her new release.

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Thank you for hosting me on your blog, Chris. I greatly appreciate it.

I am a fiction writer by training, so I never expected to be releasing a book of poetry, much less a book of poetry written in tanka. However, being a part of our wonderful blogging community for the past several years has given me the inspiration to take my writing in new directions and the courage to publish the results for others to read.

Grief Songs started with the last poem in the collection, “Portland Head Autumnal,” although I had no way of knowing that when I wrote the poem. I had been following Colleen Chesebro’s poetry blog, “Word Craft: Prose & Poetry,” for some time and growing more and more curious to try my hand at syllabic poetry adapted from Japanese, such as haiku and tanka. I wrote “Portland Head Autumnal” as a tanka after a trip to Portland Head Light in Maine on a cold, gray, windy day in September when I could not recall any time I had been to Portland Head when the sky and water were gray, rather than bright blue.

Two months later, my mother died, leaving me the last person in my immediate family. As people do, I turned to the family photograph albums in an attempt to keep my mother with me just a little longer. As part of that process, lines of poetry started coming to me. Tanka seemed the appropriate form to give those lines shape and purpose. In the book, photographs are paired with poems to tell the story of a loving family lost.

Grief is a deeply personal experience, yet it’s an experience many of us have in common, particularly as we get older.  What prompted my decision to go ahead with publishing Grief Songs were readers’ responses to some of the individual poems I shared. The poems prompted fond memories of their own loved ones. For me, striking a responsive chord with a reader’s own experience in any number of different ways is what poetry is all about.

Thanks again, Chris, for featuring Grief Songs: Poems of Love & Remembrance on your blog and giving me the opportunity to share my thoughts with your readers.

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The blurb

When a loved one dies, the family will often turn to the photograph albums as an act of solace, to keep their loved one with them just a little while longer, Grief Songs: Poems of Love & Remembrance arose from that experience. The collection opens with three free verse expressions of raw grief, followed by a series of photographs from the authorโ€™s family album, each paired with a poem written in tanka. Taken together, they tell the story of a loving family lost.

Praise for Grief Songs

“A beautiful, personal collection of family photos and poems that express the author’s most inner feelings. Nostalgic and heartfelt, Gauffreauโ€™s poems are written in the Japanese style of tanka, simple,  thoughtful, and full of love. Filled with wonderful memories of the past.” 

~Kristi Elizabeth, Manhattan Book Review

“Poetry readers willing to walk the road of grief and family connections will find Grief Songs: Poems of Love & Remembrance a psychological treasure trove. It’s a very accessible poetic tribute that brings with it something to hold onto–the memories and foundations of past family joys, large and small.”                        

~Diane Donovan, Midwest Book Review 

Book Trailer

So lovely, I’ve watched it again and again…

Grief Songs is available in paperback and ebook from all your favourite online bookstores – buy it here

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Liz’s social media links

Website: lizgauffreau.com

Amazon Author Page: www.amazon.com/Elizabeth-Gauffreau

BookBub: www.bookbub.com/profile/elizabeth-gauffreau

Goodreads: www.goodreads.com/egauffreau

Poets & Writers’ Directory: www.pw.org/node/1079971

Facebook: Facebook.com/ElizabethGauffreau

LinkedIn: www.linkedin.com/in/liz-gauffreau

Twitter: twitter.com/LGauffreau

Grief Songs, by Elizabeth Gauffreau, available in paperback and ebook

Do you believe in faeries? ~ episode 6

Illustration from the Rose Fyleman Fairy Book

Previously

Although their previous dalliance with other-worldly travel had led to a certain equanimity in how to handle unfamiliar situations, nothing had quite prepared Bryony and Mr Eyre with the sight which confronted them now.

They were surrounded by a small group of black-bearded fellows, dressed in indigo army fatigues and wielding weapons reminding Mr Eyre of the stingers found on wasps and other vespids; the overall effect would have been rather intimidating but for their small stature and the incredibly large pointy ears poking out from beneath their caps.

โ€˜Other-Worlders!โ€™ exclaimed one who, from the elaborate insignia adorning his cap, must be the captain; he craned his neck in an attempt to look Mr Eyre in the eye, โ€˜ready your weapons, men,โ€™ his eyes switched back and forth between his prisoners, โ€˜these could be tricky customers.โ€™

Six stingers began to buzz; the captain pointed first at Bryony and then Mr Eyre, โ€˜Turn out your pockets!โ€™

Mr Eyre offered Bryony a reassuring nod before emptying the pockets of his tweed jacket of everything from bus tickets to bits of string; Bryony pulled her notebook from her pinafore pocket and held it out.

 โ€˜Word-Peddler, eh?โ€™ said the captain with a sinister smirk.

next episode


Written in response to two challenges:

โ€“ Di of Pensitivity101‘s Wednesdayโ€™s Three Things Challenge โ€“ DALIANCE, BUZZ, CRANE
โ€“ Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdgeโ€˜s Sundayโ€™s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt โ€“ HANDLE

Bryony, Bethany and Mr Eyre first appeared in my historical fantasy fiction novel, Following the Green Rabbit. They’ve been begging to go on another adventure and it looks like they’ve got their wish!

More #SixSentenceStories here – don’t be shy, add one of your own!

An Uneasy Peace

The image shows a street scene of an old town in Europe.

dawnโ€™s pink fingers
caress the town awake
softening the darkness
bringing forth the light

he walks alone
fighting recollections
of grim gun-metal days
running through
crimson-spattered streets
dodging snipers
and falling shells

the war is over
but remembered sounds
and bitter memories
remain locked inside
his broken heart.


Image credit: Maksym Harbar @Unsplash

Written in response to Sadjeโ€˜s What do You See #101 photo prompt.

Happy Heritage Day

Heritage Day in the Rainbow Nation (photo Western Cape Government)

Today is Heritage Day, a public holiday in South Africa, our multi-racial, multi-cultural and muli-coloured nation. On this day, South Africans are encouraged to celebrate their culture and theย diversityย of their beliefs and traditions, in the wider context of a nation that belongs to all its people. It’s a day that has its origins in the post-1994 flush of the Rainbow Nation that sought to create unity in diversity.

Today it means different things to different South Africans, from dressing in traditional finery to firing up a braai (aka barbeque).ย Its timing coincides with the start of spring and now that some of the covid-related restrictions have been lifted, and it begins a long weekend, it’s a real feel-good holiday, even if you just stay at home.

It is also known as a National Braai Day in commemoration of the culinary tradition of informal backyard barbecues, known as braais. In September 2007, Archbishop Desmond Tutu celebrated his appointment as patron of South Africa’s Braai Day, affirming it to be a unifying force in a divided country by donning an apron and enthusiastically eating a boerewors roll. (Boerewors is a sausage, popular across Southern Africa made from coarsely minced beef and spices). Here’s the great man busy with the braai.

Desmond Tutu at the braai

Many elements and influences characterise my adopted country and when I decided to write a novel set in South Africa, almost 10 years after I came here, I began by auditioning some new characters. I placed them in different settings and through them, tested out some different themes.

In the piece below, which I originally posted in 2019, the characters represent (some of) the different groups in our diverse country. The novel I was planning eventually became ‘Song of the Sea Goddess’. If you’ve read the book, or even followed the various excerpts I’ve posted this year, maybe you can guess who the three men eventually became.

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Parched Earth

โ€˜You must call the San Man,โ€™ she whispers. โ€˜Only he can bring the rain bull.โ€™

โ€˜But how?โ€™

โ€˜You must go to the cave which watches over the veld. Go at dusk, light a fire.โ€™ She reaches into the pouch she has beside her and holds out a handful of grey-green herbs. โ€˜Burn a little of this, and then watch and wait.โ€™

He raises his eyebrows at his two companions.

The old woman holds up a finger. โ€˜He may not come the first night,โ€™ she shakes her head slowly. โ€˜He may not come at all.โ€™ She stares intently at each of them. โ€˜Now go.โ€™

The three men depart.

โ€˜I guess itโ€™s worth a try,โ€™ says the first. He is a tall, robust white man, dressed in shorts and sandals; the hint of an overseas accent.

โ€˜Another winter with no rain; we must do something,โ€™ agrees the second, a brown-skinned man, whose features echo the ancient people that once inhabited this corner of Africa.

The third man, by far the youngest of the three is silent. He too is brown-skinned, a son of the Rainbow Nation, where a multitude of peoples have planted their seeds.

Later, the three trudge silently up to the koppie where the ancient cave paintings are. The air is hot and parched like the veld. The sky turns liquid orange as the sun is swallowed up by the smudge-blue mountains. They light the fire and sprinkle herbs onto the flames. The three settle down to watch and wait.

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Now, as the sun sets, let’s gather round the fire and enjoy some of the sights and sounds of ‘National Braai Day’.

Do you believe in faeries? ~ episode 5

Illustration from the Rose Fyleman Fairy Book

Previously

Bethany stared at the green-clad brother and sister who had turned away and retreated a few steps to confer in private, she strained her ears but her grasp of their conversation was limited to what she took to be oaths and exclamations; whatever could be the matter?

She surveyed her surroundings, as she retrieved the memory of her previous encounter with an โ€˜other worldโ€™; by whatever method she had been transported to this unfamiliar place, it was important to commit the exact location of entry to memory in order to find the way back.

Their discussion over, the green-clad man marched back to Bethany and stared up at her, โ€˜Greta and I have decided, we have to hand you over to the Owl-King, we donโ€™t want to, butโ€ฆโ€™ he paused and took a breath, screwing up his eyes, โ€˜itโ€™s the Rules.โ€™

Greta hurried over to join them; taking her brotherโ€™s arm, she whispered, โ€˜Hans, thereโ€™s no need to frighten her,โ€™ she stared around with anxious eyes. โ€˜Anyway, we havenโ€™t decided; weโ€™ll go back to the house and then weโ€™ll decide.โ€™

Although Bethany still had no idea what was going on, she was certain that this Owl-King was someone best avoided.

next episode


Written in response to two challenges:

โ€“ Di of Pensitivity101‘s Wednesdayโ€™s Three Things Challenge โ€“ PRIVATE, LIMIT, RETRIEVE
โ€“ Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdgeโ€˜s Sundayโ€™s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt โ€“ METHOD

Bryony, Bethany and Mr Eyre first appeared in my historical fantasy fiction novel, Following the Green Rabbit. They’ve been begging to go on another adventure and it looks like they’ve got their wish!

More ‘Sixes’ here!