Breathlessly I peddled up the hill. Jack loved the woods. We were going there anyway, but as soon as I’d reached for his collar he’d bolted out the back door.
I threw my bike down at the end of the lane. Sandals pounding over the dry earth, I called out, running this way and that.
No Jack.
I ran deeper into the woods.
‘Jack! Jack!’
Where would a little dog go? Suddenly the woods seemed huge.
Calling his name, I ran and ran until I could run no more. I leant against the nearest tree, fighting my rising panic.
Tears ran down my cheeks. I closed my eyes and began to howl.
Then I felt something rub against my leg. I opened my eyes.
It was Jack!
I crouched down and put my arms around my little dog. I’d gone to find him, but it was he who’d found me.
Written as a ‘two for one’ prompt response to:
1) Sadje’s What Do You See #18 photo prompt – photo credit: Hoi An, Unsplash.
2) Di‘s Three Things Challenge #155 – rub, howl, collar
Beautiful attempt
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Thank you 🙂
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Made me start the day with a smile
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I’m pleased for that, Joe! Keep smiling 🙂
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Nothing feels more helpless than having lost your dog. My heart pounds just thinking about it. And I don’t even currently have a dog…..
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A horrible feeling. I couldn’t let it last long.
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Wonderful story – very heart warming words. Nicely done and thank you!
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Thank you, Suzette 🙂
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Such a touching story!
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Thanks, Andrew. I have to be nice sometimes 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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Great buildup of that all-too relatable fear with a wonderful rush of relief at the end. Brilliant & vivid!
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Thanks Tom 🙂
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Glad the pup found you!
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Thanks Di! Your 3tc was just perfect to kick this one off yesterday morning 🙂
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Loved it.
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I’m guessing Jack leads her back out of the forest as well! Good story, Chris.
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Oh yes, definitely a happy ending this time 🙂
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yes, a happy ending this time, was going to flinch if jack had turned into something else, hehe
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Now hopefully Jack can find the way out 🙂
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I’m certain he can!
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😉
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That’s so sweet.
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There’ll be cake for tea as well!
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