Bright moonlight reflects off the rain-bull’s back, casting a myriad of shadows across the barren landscape. His body strains against invisible shackles. At last, pulling free of his bonds, he throws his head back and roars.
The two men watch as the San Man raises the point of his spear-stick skyward, lifting his face to the still-clear sky where Orion with his belt of three she-tortoises guards the night and shooting stars carve graceful arcs across the heavens, measuring out the width of the veld below.
The rain-bull bellows again and the mountains ripple beneath the watchers’ feet. The great beast paws at the rock, displacing an avalanche of stones which trickle down the drought-cursed ravines. Dark clouds gather, veiling the silver moon. The two men stand silent at the San Man’s side, streams of pebbles cascading past their planted feet.
Back on the koppie the young man stands hand-in-hand with the once-maiden. Already there is a quickening in her belly. They raise their glowing faces towards the mountains.
The rain-bull roars again. Thunder rolls around the wide bowl of the veld. The San Man casts his spear-stick in a slow arc around his head. Thunder booms. The mountains roll and pitch under the heavy footfalls of the great beast.
The rain-bull is almost upon them. The two men cower, but the San Man stands firm. The rain-bull pauses and the San Man raises his spear-stick once more. Lightning issues from its point and the rain-bull lowers his great head.
/… to be continued
The story stops at an intriguing point!
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…tune in next time 😉
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Of course I will 👍👍👍
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Great cinematic feel to this. Can picture it perfectly! 🙂
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Thanks, Tom. I’m pleased I can paint the pictures in your head!
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Two leg and four leg Alpha’s stand head to head. The beast has brute strength, the San Man has the elements. I love this scene!
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How beautifully summarized, Darnell! Thanks for the lovely feedback 🙂
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I’m enjoying the story 🤗
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Hurrah! So am I 🙂
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I’m still in awe of your pantsing-wizardry on this–and the rest of your writing. Great stuff!
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Where the story-pictures lead, I follow 🙂
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