
Little heart fluttering
in the palm of my hand
what delight to share a moment
with such a pretty little creature!
Won’t you stay awhile?
Scooped from the rail
my tiny bones quake
and now, eyes squeezed shut
I wait for the giant to crush me
in its big, clumsy fist.
Be calm, little bird
do not fear me
allow me to look more closely
admire the beauty
of your bright plumage.
The hand seems gentle
but I shan’t be taken in.
I open a wary eye
prepare for flight
I’m gone!
Farewell, little bird
I’ll listen for your song
here by the lake
me, in gentle harmony
with nature.
Written in response to Sadje’s What Do You See #49 photo prompt.
Image credit: Evan Clark – Unsplash
A great one! Thank you for sharing, and have a beautiful week! Michael
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Thanks, Michael! You have a lovely week too 🙂
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Thank you Chris! 🙂
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What a beautiful poem. Loved it. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Goutam 😉
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This is a wonderful poem. Love the two sides views and thoughts. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you, Sadje! What a pleasure it is to participate 🙂
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You’re so kind.
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Love how you have juxtaposed what’s going on in their minds! Beautifully expressed, Chris.
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Thanks so much, Punam 🙂
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You are welcome. 🙂
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I like the two different thought processes here, Chris. I’d love for the birds to be more trusting of us, but I can’t say I blame them being how they are.
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Humans aren’t very trustworthy, are they?
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Not really… and they seem to be getting worse! 🙁
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Sadly so, but not all of them 🙂
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True… can’t tar the whole lot! 🙂
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Lovely dialogue, Chris. I like the layout, very clever.
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Thanks, Cath 🙂 A new challenge from the block editor!
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I loved to hear from the two sides. Beautifully crafted, Chris
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Thanks, Shweta 🙂
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My pleasure 😊
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Trust is hard to come by, but worth the effort. Loved to two-sided POV Chris.
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If only there was more. We can’t blame nature though…
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So sweet!
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Please you liked it, Debra 🙂
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What a lovely idea for the structure. Beautifully put together!
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Thanks, Matthew! I’ve never tried a bird’s POV before.
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[…] Trust Me […]
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oh wow its so beautiful Chris..
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Thanks so much, Mich 🙂
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I love this dialog between human and bird!
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That was a fun one to write. Glad you enjoyed it, Liz 🙂
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🙂
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This was so delightful Chris. I am always in awe of birds. They are such amazingly strong little creatures 🥰
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Thanks so much, Christine. I spend a lot of time gazing out of the window at them 🙂
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Yes, I do the same Chris ☺️
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I saved the life of a baby swift fallen to the ground once. It stayed overnight, and the next day I threw it up in the sky and it flew away. They say the swifts one back to the same place they were born every year, and each summer I wonder if it remembers us. It might, it seemed very intelligent 🙂
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How wonderful! The few birds I’ve tried to rescue haven’t had such happy endings. I’m sure it does recognise you. If they can remember places, I’m sure they can remember people. Especially ones who rescue them. 🙂
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The most interesting part is that it seemed to understand I wanted to help it. It was extremely warm weather, which is probably the reason it fell to the ground trying its wings, and it jumped voluntarily towards me and into our flat from the balcony (after bringing it on from the street). I don’t know if there’s been any studies of their cognitive abilities, but it seems highly conscious of itself and its surroundings.
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What a lovely experience! I don’t think we give other creatures the credit the deserve for their abilities.
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Loved the interesting perspectives of both parties….can’t blame the bird though for not trusting…
Wonderfully crafted👍
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Thanks so much, Roshni 🙂
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So beautifully expressed, Chris! Well done! 🤗💟
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Thank you. I’m pleased you enjoyed!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Such a wonderfully written piece.
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Thank you, Leif!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Cherie 🙂
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You’re very welcome, Chris! ☺
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[…] Chris; Trust me […]
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I have yet to be able to lure my bird friends in my hand. But I whistle to them and have many an interesting musical conversation 🙂
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All in good time!
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