Borne on sacred scents, my development is complete. Now, incarnated in astral form, I hover over the occidental shore of the earth’s most populous continent.
I brace myself for the coming cacophony. My throat fills, and at Gaia’s command, I throw back my head and let fly the discordant melody that holds the power to move mountains: an unstoppable force, unleashed from the fragile firmament to the barely broken azure below.
Waves of disharmony filter through the air, a hideous marriage of chords of doom and pitches of despair.
The earth’s crust shatters
sulphurous strings billow forth:
Mount Teide tumbles.
Image credit: Clive Kim on Pexels.com
Written in response to two challenges:
– Di of Pensitivity101‘s Wednesday’s Three Things Challenge – MARRIAGE, STRING, DEVELOPMENT
– Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdge‘s Sunday’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt – FILTER
I have also set myself the additional challenges of confining my piece to 100 words exactly and writing this, now ongoing story, in the haibun form. Just for fun!
Ooh love! ❤️🔥
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Thanks, Paula! I’m so pleased 🙂
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Wow! This story is so dramatic. 🤩👍👍👍
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Thanks, Sadje! I’m having a lot of fun with these 🙂
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I am lot of fun reading this too.
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😀
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🤩
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Powerful story! So much conveyed in so few lines – brilliant!
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Thanks, Tom! Pleased you’re enjoying this 🙂
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Superbly evoked
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Many thanks! 🙂
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You are most welcome 🌺🌹🌺
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OMG: this is just awesome Chris!
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Thanks so much, Di 🙂
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you’re very welcome
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I love the power about to be unleased. I want it!
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Ooh, be careful what you wish for, Liz! 😉
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I know! I see the danger ahead, but I want that power anyway!
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I guess we all better watch out then! 😀
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Indubitably!
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Nicely and descriptively penned Chris 🙂
By the way – Happy Thursday to you
Have a great day.
https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2021/03/18/universal-greetings-18/
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Thanks, Rory 🙂 and thank you for the music! Have a wonderful rest-of-the-day.
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Thanks Chris, l will most assuredly try 🙂
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I guess ‘powerful’ is an understatement but it’s all I’ve got! Excellent use of the prompt.
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Thanks, Susan!
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Dude(tte)!*
Excellent Six, yo
*compliment on a simple scene that goes all Velcro on the Reader and they proceed to the rabbit hole.
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Thanks, Clark! Hope you weren’t away too long 😉
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well done. i agree with the comments above. evoked is the best way to say it!
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Many thanks!
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I like the thought of there being power in a melody to move mountains even if discordant melody. I also like the ominous tumbling of Mount Tiede in the haiku.
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Thanks, Frank! I was imaging that if you could hit the right note, with the right degree of power, the earth’s crust might shatter like the proverbial wine glass…
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Beautifully written SSS!
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Many thanks, Pat 🙂
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What a last paragraph. Volcanic power in those words!
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Thanks, Matthew! I may have unleashed a monster.
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You’ve painted a picture of power and fear.
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Thanks, Mimi! I’m pleased I got that across 🙂
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You’ve been steadily building the tension in each succeeding installment and now, I’m not so sure I’m ready to find out how it culminates, lol. Gripping storyline, Chris!
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Thanks, Denise! I have a feeling that this can only end badly. Very badly!
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😬
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I’m sensing turmoil here, Chris, choppy waters in a storm! Love it!
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Turmoil and tumult on the way, Tom 🙂
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Can feel the power from above which will cause the most populous city into a mess. This was an amazing read.
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So very kind of you, Kritika 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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