Oh, how I crave your
sweet succulent charms
long to smell the perfume
of your honey-coloured skin
Oh, how yearn for your
sweet yielding softness
ache for the touch
of your full fragrant form
I hunger to taste
your deep spicy sweetness
to nibble, caress and
sate my desire
temptation takes over
my lips are a-tremble
I close my eyes
and swallow you up.
Image credit: Jovan Vasiljeviฤ
Written in response to Sadjeโs What do You See #103 photo prompt.
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Oh my! What a sweet/ naughty poem Chris. Really enjoyed it my friend. Thanks for joining in
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Hehehe! Pleased you enjoyed that, Sadje ๐๐ฉ
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Thanks ๐
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Ha ha nice one Chris.. ๐
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I’m pleased that it appealed to you, HS! ๐๐
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This one makes me crave for doughnuts too. Beautifully written, Chris
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I’d hoped it would! Thanks, Shweta ๐๐ฉ
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Superb, love how youโve added a tantalising touch of the forbidden ๐
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Thanks, Deb! I was trying to err on the side of subtlety.๐
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And you did it very well ๐คฃ
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BTW I just tried to comment on your blog about making your story into a serial – cos we all want to read it now. However, my comment wouldn’t register, I tried a couple of times. Maybe it went to spam? It’s happened to me a few times on different blogs this morning. ๐ค
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The gremlins of WordPress. I’ll have a look
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Thank you…๐
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I will never look at the donuts the same. ๐
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You made my day there, Cassa! ๐๐
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Chris, now that was a very tantalising look at donuts or was it! ๐ Super fun! ๐โค๏ธ
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Let’s just say it’s open to interpretation, Punam… ๐๐
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So it is! ๐๐
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Wonderful poem. I know the feelings. I would love just one, but I love myself more!
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Thank you! It’s true that doughnuts aren’t very healthy, so probably best avoided ๐
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Haha, this made me laugh, Chris, I’ve never eaten a doughnut.
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๐ That was my intention. You’ve never eaten a doughnut?? Not that I’ve had one for years…
BTW, I believe my comments on your site are sliding straight to your spam folder. It’s been happening with a few folks’ sites… maybe WP doesn’t approve of doughnuts!
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Oh dear, I will go and check. I often forget to check spam. I’ve never eaten a doughnut because I had yellow jaundice very badly as a girl. As a result my liver is a bit damaged and fried foods make me feel sick. My sons usually get to eat my chips when we go out.
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My system doesn’t like fried foods or eating later in the evening. My husband is the ‘chip-hoover’!
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How strange, I had three comments in my spam and they were all from you.
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Thanks for checking, Robbie ๐ I’m not sure when the problem will be fixed. I’m still finding my comments not registering on some sights.
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Ooh sweet and sultry all wrapped in one, Well done, Chris.
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So please you enjoyed it, Mason!
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Ah yes, I agree the temptation here is hard to resist, Chris. My poem too had me succumb to the temptation ๐
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Isn’t it just! I’ll pop over to read yours just now… ๐
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Many of my comments are slipping into spam โน – you’ll probably find this there…
“…committing adultery with my diet plan…” – love it, Radhika!
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Love it! And you know, they say if you close your eyes when you eat them they wonโt have any calories!๐
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Haha! I must remember that, Deb! ๐
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Never till now have I considered doughnuts to be sensual! I need to go and sit down for a moment or two!
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Thanks, Keith! *wafting you with a fan* ๐
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This sounds like a love poem written for a sweet face behinds the donuts! Well written, Chris/ ๐
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Thanks so much, Miriam ๐
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You’re welcome, Chris. ๐
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Hehe! Sounds like a love affair if there ever was one!!
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Absolutely, Val! ๐ฅ
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That’s a yummy poem ๐ ๐ ๐
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Thanks, Vignesh, I’m pleased you enjoyed it!
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Welcome ๐
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I knew i commented here yesterday ..lol…but its gone…
This is beautiful Chris…i love how you made it sound like a sweet romantic love affair..
P. S.
I am almost done reading your book
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Thanks so much, Mich! I don’t know what happened to your comment. I didn’t find it in my spam folder when I looked just now. I’m not sure what’s happening with my account and my comments. I’ve contacted the ‘Happiness Engineers’ to see if there’s anything they can do. Very frustrating.
Meantime, I hope you been enjoying the book? ๐
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I have been experiencing WP glitches myself and i guess its that time of the year when it happens..lol
And yes i love your book..its like a story is within another story and i must say, so brave of you for writing that and using that technique because it takes a brilliant story teller to be able to weave the intricate details….
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Ooh, thank you, Mich! You have me blushing with your kind words ๐๐ฅฐ
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I will msg you re: the paperback lol..we still want the smell of the printed book๐
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๐๐print is best (will look out for it)
I’ve just commented on your ‘Mag’ post on WP – it went to spam, so – “whoo-hoo, hitting the big time!”
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Ohhhh
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks so much for sharing!
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Always a pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Friend!! Have a great day!
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You too! ๐
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Cleverly written, Chris!
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Thanks, Eugenia!
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Truth be told, I had that experience with a glazed doughnut yesterday. (Don’t tell.)
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Your secret is safe with me! ๐
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This is so clever.
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Thanks very much, Gary ๐
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Chris, this is absolutely fantastic. Well done! โบ๏ธ๐ฉ๐
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Thanks, so much, Jeff! ๐
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Welcome, Chris! โบ๏ธ
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Yum. I can think of some other foods besides donuts that your verses could apply.
I think your verses could also make a cute children’s book – with fun bakery illustrations!
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Oh, that does sound fun! ๐๐ฐ๐ฅ
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Rather, illustrations of baked goodies!
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Works both ways, I think, Jules! ๐
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Guilty pleasures (Doughnut or no Doughnut)… ๐๐… Nice one Chris .. ๐๐
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Hehehe – thanks, Joe!
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Sensual and beautiful. โคโคโค
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Thanks so much, Shreya ๐
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Oh my my my. Are we taking about donuts here?! Uuumm. Loved it! Well written.
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Erm, probably, Dee! I’m pleased you enjoyed it, however you interpreted it… ๐๐
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clever & too true lol
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No matter which way you read it! ๐ Thanks, da-AL
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Num num num num num! Welp, now you’ve got me hungry, Chris. ๐ What’s your favorite donut?
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It has to be jam! Although I can’t remember when I last had one… (now I want one, of course!)
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