End of week two, and it’s still going pretty well. Ten chapters almost complete and I’m more or less on track with the word count, although that’s not so important as far as I’m concerned.
Getting the story down is what matters to me. It’s coming along nicely; some mysteries are unfolding and some new characters are evolving.
And it’s still fun.
Remember I mentioned that what I’m writing during NaNo is a sequel to my new novel? Well, here’s the surprise. Exclusively for you, a sneak peak of the cover design and a tiny teaser from the blurb.
Just a few more steps to go and I’ll be ready to offer advance reader copies for anyone who’d like one. More details to follow, but if you’re interested in getting hold of one, please let me know in the comments.
All for now. I’m diving right back in to my new story again.
Have a great rest of the weekend, whatever you’re doing!
Sinead woke to a star-bright night. The only sounds were of the bubbling brook and the gentle breathing of Moonsprite and the Hound who slept on either side of her.
โSinead?โ A whisper came from the other side of the clearing. โSinead?โ The soft voice was closer now. Sineadโs hand went to her sword. No need.
She sat up and looked around her. โWhere are you?โ Sinead whispered into the darkness, not wanting to disturb her companions.
โI am everywhere. In the wind and in the trees, in a blade of grass and a field of corn, in the bubbling brook and in the starlight.โ
โWho are you?โ
โI think you know the answer. Isnโt that why you are here?โ
โMother Earth?โ
โYes, child.โ
โBut I was sent to free you. The Prophesy Book said…โ
โWorry not, Sinead,โ Mother Earthโs voice murmured. โAll is about to be revealed. Sleep now.โ
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Unknown waters lie ahead, our future is opaque, obscure, still uncharted
No more mapped out milestones, no glittering goals to accomplish
Certainty has ceased, while we clutch at withered straws
Ever searching for proper patterns to pursue, the
Return to routine, to the mindful mundane
That frees us, and comforts us
And will sustain our souls
If only in illusion.
No chance of
That hope
Yet
Written in response toย Sadjeโsย What Do You See #54ย photo prompt. Image credit: Evan Clark, Unsplash (The image shows a person precariously balanced, standing on a fallen tree trunk hanging over a body of water).
The first week is over – already! All is going well (so far). Words are flowing, characters are cooperating, and lo, I’ve even done a little bit of ‘panster planning’.
I’m embarking on the sequel to my soon-to-be-released novel and it’s certainly easier working with a core cast of fully-formed characters. New ones too, are appearing from the wings and it’s exciting getting to know them.
Here’s the mind map I’ve been scribbling, which is supplementing the jottings of my developing thoughts in a notebook. Don’t try to read my terrible handwriting. I blame it on years of note taking.
So, in summary, how am I doing? Five chapters (almost) completed 7169 words written (all of them good ones)
Verdict: Just a handful of words shy of my target. I’m happy with that!
The Hound broke into a run; Moonsprite followed. The day was dawning as they sped off across the Garden. The air grew warm and the trees and flowers sprung into life once again.
On and on they travelled, while the sun climbed beyond its zenith. Finally, the Hound slowed to a trot, Moonsprite matched his pace and Sinead caught a glimpse of a fawn with her mother and a the bright red brush of a foxโs tail disappearing into the undergrowth.
They arrived at a sunlit glade, where birdsong filled the air. A bubbling brook threaded through the grass. The Hound padded over and drank deeply. Sinead and Moonlight followed suit, the sweet water more refreshing than any theyโd tasted. The Hound lay down. Moonsprite rested too. Both had expended much of their energy in their flight from the Gates.
Sinead lay down between them and surrendered herself to sleep.
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Everything comes to she who waits. Hold on! Shine bright! Never lose that spark, that drive the curiosity of a child.
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Shall I? Shan’t I? This is what Iโve been asking myself over the past few weeks. I think I vowed not to do this again at the end of last November. Iโd made hard work of it, although I didnโt need to; not that I signed up for the โreal dealโ, just a modest target of 30,000 words. However, in the end, I did get half a novel almost completed within the month.
So it was worth it!
That novel is now complete. Song of the Sea Goddess is due for release early next year and, in the meantime, I shall be offering advance reader copies to any of you whoโd like to read it and review it. More about this soon.
So, NaNo again?
You bet! But on my own informal personal terms like last year and the year before:
– Target 30,000 words.
– Write at least 5 chapters each week.
– Enjoy it!
That wonโt be a whole novel. It will be a good start.
Todayโs stop on our literary journey through my novels takes us to a specific part of Liverpool. From the pages of Youโll Never Walk Alone, we visit one of best-known and best-loved traditional hostelries in the city, The Philharmonic Dining Rooms, commonly known as โThe Philโ.
Built at the beginning of the 20th century, the building is an architectural gem. The interior is ornately decorated using musical themes that relate to the concert hall across the road. Two of the smaller side rooms are appropriately named, โBrahmsโ and โLisztโ and, although I donโt mention them by name, it is in one of these rooms that Ruth and Connor settle themselves in the excerpt below. Also of note in this splendid location are the gentlemenโs urinals, which are made from rose-coloured marble (ladies are allowed to take a peek when itโs not busy, and yes, of course Iโve been for a look).
This grand public house is popular with folk from all walks of life, but especially โartyโ types like writers and musicians, and students. Close to the campus of the University of Liverpool, where I studied back in the early 1980s when the novel is set, it was always a popular stop on the way into town of an evening. Connor would be in his element here, and indeed in any bar!
Connor and Ruth arrive at โThe Philโ by way of St. Lukeโs Gardens, where they first meet up. Better known as the โBombed Out Churchโ, St. Lukeโs another well-known Liverpool landmark, popular for assignations of various kinds. The church was badly bombed during the WWII and only the shell remains, but the gardens, even then, were nicely kept and were open to the public during the day.
One final note: there is an art supplies shop in Slater Street, called Jacksonโs. One of those โproperโ old shops, which has been there since the late 1890s. Past customers include famous Liverpool artists, Augustus John and Stuart Sutcliffe. I had a friend who worked there. I suppose that Ruth might have been very, very loosely based on her. Donโt let the unprepossessing photo put you off. Itโs changed a bit since the photo below was taken, although this is more how I remember it.
Excerpt from Youโll Never Walk Alone
Ruth checked that the back door was locked and bolted, snatched up her keys and handbag, and picked up a package from the counter. She fastened her coat and pulled the hood over her short blonde hair before stepping out into the early evening drizzle. She quickly double-locked the front door and padlocked the wrought iron gates over the shop front of Windsorโs Art Supplies, the family shop which her great, great-grandfather had opened in 1879.
She glanced up and down Slater Street, then crossed the road into the narrow street opposite. The heels of her shoes struck the pavement determinedly. A few minutes later she was hurrying across the busy road towards the gardens of the bombed-out church of St Lukeโs. The cathedral clock further up the hill was just striking five oโclock as Ruth entered the church gardens. Her eyes followed the pathway as she searched for the man she was meeting. The gardens were all but deserted, the wooden benches set at intervals around the pathway empty apart from one.
As Ruth approached the man stood up and raised his hat to her. โGood evening to you,โ he said. โThank you for coming.โ He smiled and held out his hand. โThey call me โThe Poetโ,โ he said, gazing intently into her eyes.
Ruth introduced herself and shook his hand firmly.
โPlease join me on my solitary pew, Miss Windsor,โ he continued, indicating the damp bench with a sweeping gesture. Ruth detected an Irish accent. She noticed his striking blue-green eyes which lit up his craggy face. For an older man, she found him really rather attractive.
Ruth tucked her coat under her as she sat down. The rain had stopped, but water continued to drip from the trees and bushes.
She was puzzled though. โThe Poet? I was expecting someone else. The order was placed byโฆโ
โMy associate, Pierre Bezukhov.โ Connor said triumphantly. โYou do have the painting for me then?โ
All along sheโd thought it was strange that her client had wanted to meet her away from the shop, and now heโd sent someone else to pick up the painting. Still, a commission was a commission. Shrugging her shoulders, Ruth handed him the package.
Taking it from her he fingered the packaging: โShall we take a little look?โ It had started to rain again. Connor looked skyward. โBut not here. Letโs get out of the weather.โ Turning to Ruth he said: โMiss Windsor, would you care to accompany me to a nearby hostelry, to seal the deal with a little drink as it were..?โ
Ruth hesitated. โWellโฆโ
โDear Miss Windsor, I would really like to have a look at it while youโre with me.โ Connor looked at her intently.
Ruth stared back at him. โAll right, fine.โ
โThe Phil?โ
โOkay, letโs go before we get any wetter.โ
They left the gardens and hurried up the road to The Philharmonic Dining Rooms, the grand Victorian pub known for its rich tiling, stained glass and chandeliers, and of course, its wide selection of alcoholic beverages.
There were only a handful of people standing around the bar area when they arrived. They selected an empty corner in one of the small side rooms and Connor went to fetch their drinks. Ruth took off her coat and smoothed down her skirt. She eyed the package which The Poet had left on the table between them.
Connor returned empty-handed. โSo sorry Miss Windsor, I appear to have forgotten my wallet.โ
Ruth fished in her handbag and retrieved a scrunched up five pound note from its depths. She held it out to him. โPlease, do call me Ruth, especially if Iโm buying.โ
Connor took the note with a slight bow and hurried back to the bar. He returned with a pint of Guinness and a gin and tonic. He piled up the change on the table in front of her. She scooped up the notes and coins and dropped them into an inner recess of her bag.
Connor lifted his glass and took a generous mouthful. Putting the drink down, he picked up the painting, then having untied the wrapper carefully he peeked inside.
Ruth leant towards him over the table and whispered: โThe Turner, as ordered.โ She took a sip of her drink.
Connor looked up, his eyebrows raised over those striking blue-green eyes. โAn original?โ
Ruth frowned. โNo, of course not. You donโt know?โ she paused. Something was wrong. โThis is exactly as the client requested,โ she whispered across the table.
โYes. Yes of course. Just picking it up for a friend donโt you know?โ The Poet sounded doubtful. He re-tied the wrapper and took a large pull on his pint. Cradling the painting in his lap, he looked earnestly at Ruth: โHe did pay for it, I trust?โ
โWell,โ said Ruth slowly, โhe gave me a bank deposit slip for the payment. Otherwise I wouldnโt have completed the commission for him.โ
โSure he did. Of course.โ Connor nodded thoughtfully. There was something fishy going on. A forgery? No, surely just a copy. Ruth didnโt strike him as someone whoโd be mixed up in something underhand. If he did take the painting from her, and she seemed quite prepared to let him have it, what was the worst that could happen?
โListen, Miss Windsorโฆ Ruthโฆ hereโs the receipt I got fromโฆ er, Mr Bezukhov,โ Connor held out the crumpled piece of paper. Is there something you need me to sign?
Ruth rummaged in her bag and pulled out a well-used receipt book and a pen. She leaved through the pages. โHere we are,โ she said, placing the book in front of him and pointing. โJust sign here.โ
Connor quickly scribbled an indecipherable squiggle and passed the book back to her. โThank you Ruth, itโs been a pleasure meeting you.โ He drained his glass and tucking the painting under his arm, stood up. โMaybe our paths may cross again.โ He smiled, blue-green eyes twinkling, as he raised his hat to her.
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Sineadโs fear turned to relief then joy when, as the gloom lifted, she recognized the creature standing before them. It was the Hound of Hellidore. He who had saved her from the Minotaur back in the Maze of Mandoran. But hadnโt he been slain? She rushed to embrace him, but his resolute bearing restrained her and instead she bent down to pick up the Orb.
As she did so, it rolled beyond her reach. Sinead scuttled after it, scooping it up as it came to rest. Sinead straightened up, finding herself standing before a face, etched in stone, its expression contorted in agony. She stepped back in horror. It was the face of the Gatekeeper.
Sinead whirled around and found the Houndโs golden eyes staring back at her. He lowered his head and gave one sharp bark. Moonsprite pawed the ground. We must go!
Sinead flung herself onto Moonspriteโs back.
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