In that darkest hour
just before dawn
when night-time terrors
clutch my heart
You are here.
In black-dog moments
when tears well up
and despair’s dark hands
wrench me apart
You are here.
When sunbeams stream forth
as storm clouds part
and laughter and song
fill my heart
You are here.
And we will survive
this troubled world
because together, my love
we are strong.
Written as a ‘two for one’ prompt response to:
1) Sadje’s What Do You See #24 photo prompt – photo credit: Pexels.
2) Di of Pensitivity 101‘s Three Things Challenge #198 – phobia, cry, laugh (loosely)
Loved this Chris.
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Thanks Di 🙂
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🙂 you’re welcome
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This is brilliant. Both an acknowledged of the situation and a panacea for it. Thanks for being a part of the challenge.
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Thanks Sadje! Your prompts are always inspiring and I really enjoying being part of this 🙂
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You’re always welcome Chris. Thanks for your support
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A gorgeous take Chris. I love this
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Thanks for saying, Jude 🙂
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My pleasure 😊
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Yes, I like this, Chris. And together we are strong – very true!
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Thank you, kind sir! *drops a curtsy*
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🙂
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Love it!
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Thanks Debra 🙂 Although we’re all far apart, our the blogging community is together.
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may i know what is black-dog moments meaning 🙂
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It refers to depression or depressive thoughts. ‘Black dog’ was the term Winston Churchill used to describe his own depression.
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Beautiful!
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I really wanted to offer a more uplifting contribution amongst all the angst I’ve been reading recently 🙂
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I hear you!
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I loved the chanting feel throughout the poem and the finale!
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Thank you 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful Chris 🥰 This a wonderful inspiring poem to remind us we are not alone.
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Thanks Christine! I’m so pleased that you enjoyed my little piece of positivity 🙂
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It’s a poem for everyone Chris. Lovely 🥰
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Beautifully penned and heartfelt. Love it. ❤
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Thanks Lucy 🙂
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An absolute delighful poem Chris😊😊😊
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Thanks, Mich 🙂
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A lovely poem! A perfect read for the Easter weekend. We must hope on! xxxxx
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🙂 Thanks Jean! – Have a good Easter xx
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Yasss, we are Luna! Way to go!
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I wanted to inject some positivity into our minds!
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Great way to do so.
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Chris this feels like a prayer to me, and this prayer lifts me up ❤
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I’m very happy with that interpretation. I wrote the poem as an affirmation of comfort from whichever source a person might find it.
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This was so uplifting! I love your imagery with “black dog moments” and “despair’s dark hands”.
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That’s lovely feedback! Thank you 🙂
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This is a really good song lyric its got everything. If you put it to music it would be super, every verse lulling the listener into another world.
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Thank you, Michael! I hadn’t thought of it as a lyric but I can see now, after the distance of a few weeks since writing the poem, how the rhythm does lend itself to a tune. Unfortunately I’m not quite so musical as you.
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Well, shall I try to put a tune to it for you?
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That would be awesome! Yes, please 🙂
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Thank you, I’ll keep you posted, no pun intended.
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Looking forward to it!
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Hello thanks for the like, I have started on the putting a melody to your poem. It seems so good so far i suppose. There were two or three attempts at finding a tune. At first, I thought it Roxy music style . . . I know! Best regards 🙂 Smily mike
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This is very exciting, Mike! – I’ve no objection to Roxy Music… one of the sounds I grew up with. My musical taste is pretty eclectic – anything last century… 🙂
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